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schedule May 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if Allie really is in love with another man or was it a lie. Allie seemed so in love with Max during the bike trip. I can't help but wonder if she is testing Max's love for her. Maybe she is testing Max to see how far she can push him. I think deep down she wants him to come find her and take her in hand like the other Doms do to their Subs. I think a trip over Max's knee and some words of love maybe what Allie is hungry for. I think Max has been to worried about her abuse in her past to give her the spanking she really needs and wants.
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy to see your new update. Your story is so unique, I love it so much. I've been hooked on it for a week now. I can hardly sleep at night wondering what is going to happen next in your story. I may have a little bit of a obsession with it. I may need to seek help.LOL
Great Job!
person Makovaso
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!! Thank you. Update soon.
person lkm40
schedule May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was such a wonderful chapter! I have been following this story since the very beginning and adore it. The interaction between Damon and Harry was priceless, although I agree that Harry should be talked to by Sev. His accusation was out of line--pet or not--a person should not accuse without all the facts.

I feel so sorry for Max, but I really hated Allie, especially after the dinner at Damon and Grant's house. I'm not sorry to see her go, but I hope that Max finds someone who'll love him and the kids.

Thanks again for this incredible story.
schedule May 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered your story and have been glued to it for days now. I love it! My eyes are open to a world I new existed but never understood. At least now I feel I have a pretty good idea of what it must be like. Thank you for that.
Wow, I understand just what you mean when you say August in MO. is brutal. I grew up in MO. and understand how hot it can get.
I love your fiction and I'm looking forward to more chapters.Thanks
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm.... I want some Chocolate Raspberry with whipped cream...

Great chapter! I enjoyed the bonding between Harry and Grant. Poor Grant thinking he was a bad wizard when for years and years he just didn't have a proper wand... :(

Love this fic as always! :)
person Leentjef
schedule May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow very very very good
i real like the bond between grand and harry
and the new wand very good
keep going and post soon
bye bye
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Super chapter! I'm so glad that Grant and Harry are getting along again :) Please please please update again soon!
person Aalto
schedule May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it. It took quite long with this chapter but it was certainly worth the wait! But I do hope that since summer and summer holidays are comming that the next one wont take so long. Please, do keep writing and update soon.
person Anon
schedule April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok, now that i have finaly read the story, i need more chapters..more ok,, this is very good..i like it...keep em coming...