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person Leentjef
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW THIS WAS FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i REALLY LIKE THE SENES BETWEEN RICH AND JASON
KEEP GOING AND POST REAL SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON
BYE BYE
person duskstar
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow...I just discovered this and sat down and read this in one go, I got so absorbed I forgot about the time! I'm really impressed with the way you've made your characters interact and I love the dom/sub aspects of the story. I also appreciate your sensitivity in the way you deal with sexual, physical and mental abuse. I went through stuff like that for many years and it's rare to find the after effects dealt with so realistically and so well as you do here. Looking forward to reading more.
Duskstar :)
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the flooger play, very sexy!
Max and Allie are so sweet together.
Wonder chapter, as always.
person sarken02
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to drop you a note and say that I hope your mother is doing better, and that I hope you will be adding a new chapter soon, as I have been following your story since around chapter 60. I also wanted to tell you that in all of the Harry Potter fanfic I have read, both adult and non, yours is by far the most well written and well developed story and plotline I have encountered.
Anxiously awaiting your next chapter,
sarken02
person Severine
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful Chapter, thank you!
I really hope for Grant to be better soon.
And it is absolutely beatiful to see haw Rich cares about Jason, i hope he doesn't do anything stupid.

Also I wish you're mother a safe surgery and a speedy recovery.

RL is a bitch sometimes, i hope it gets better for you soon.
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww... what a sweet ending to that chapter!!! I hope your Mom's surgery goes well. Thanks for the update! :) It was very enjoyable. I hope Richard figures out what's wrong with Grant before it gets any worse... Poor Grant.
person shelagh
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow great update!!!! Thanks for the fix!
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope richard can help poor grant. I am still in love with this story and all of it's character's update soon.
person Leentjef
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW i love this story
god i really love it, could you send me this story an word file please
keep going and post soon
ps i love the jeason and rich scenes
bye bye
person Leentjef
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW i love this story
god i really love it, could you send me this story an word file please
keep going and post soon
ps i love the jeason and rich scenes
bye bye