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schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just spent 3 days reading your wonderful story and i have thouraghly enjoyed it
i love how emotional and sweet it is plus of course the hot smex lol
anyway its great and i cant wait to read more
sorry i suck at reveiws but its a great story
tanx 4 sharing
schedule December 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh that was so good and a great christmas gift. I can't wait for the next update but I will real life can suck. I am not leaving this story until you guys do. Have a good holiday
person Leentjef
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What the fuck what an ending
i hop you are ging to past real soon waht i love this fic
keep up the fantastic work and post ssoooooooooooooooonn
bye bye
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I wonder what it is that is the problem with Damon!
person Leentjef
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey were are you?
i am waiting on a new post
please post soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
i can't wait anymore

bye bye
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi! have been reading your fic for a while now but never reviewed...was too lazy to register just to say 'love your story! wait for more'. Anyway, I finally kicked myself into it because of your "Grant's problem" plot. The idea was whispering to me for some time and with this chapter I think I know what's going on with Grant. Harry said "I just felt like I needed to have you come inside me. It was this... pressing urge suddenly. Like... like, I had to have it or I was going to combust or something if I didn't feel it rushing inside of me." and didn't Grant say something similar to Damon? Like he couldn't have enought? I think during their "time of the year" Fleymanns have the urge to become pregnant, ergo the need to have sex. I seem to remember that Grant began to have problems after the loss of his last child, and the more time pass the more his hormones go crazy and make him horny.But Damon had a vasectomy after the last miscarriage so he CAN'T have anymore children. Couldn't Grant's body be aware that Damon's come is spermless? and try to make it up by pushing Grant to have more sex in hopes to become "fertilised"? and the more time pass the more he's near menoposis the more urgent it become to be pregnant. I think the problem wouldn't have been so severe or wouldn't even have existed if Damon hadn't be operated and if Grant had taken contraceptives insted. Am I right??

Well, thanks for reading all my rambling, and good luck in writing the next of this wonderful story (even if I don't like Allie, Max's too wipped for his own good she's always manipulating him I always have the feeling she's laughing evilly in her head)

Ladysaturne
schedule November 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um, one question: when did Jason get the job at the mortar + pestle?? I must have zoned out or something..Cause I missed it! I've really been enjoying this story, although the Fleymanns thing kinda freaked me out lol...Um...I guess you like Evanescence, huh? Cool *thumbs up* Anyway, update soonish!! :)

schedule November 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yet another brilliant chapter, I don't know how you've kept this story going this long and still kept it interesting. You are truly the most gifted fan fiction author I know of. Keep up the utterly fantastic work Hun!
person HPTwin
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I hope you can update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
person lkm40
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story gets more and more incredible with every chapter you write. I always look forward to your updates.