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schedule May 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love this story i wish it was complete

person lizkrohn
schedule May 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

love the story but why did it just stop?

schedule March 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Are you still working on this story. I enjoy it so much and hope that you will update again after all these years. 

person Update please!!
schedule October 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Can you please update this and finish it?! Thanks!

person Zoe
schedule October 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I just finished chapter 118 aND noticed something that was wrong. I was raised in West Virginia, West Virginia University is not in Charleston. It is in a town called Morgantown up in the northern part of the state. Just wanted to let you know. Love the story so far
person Hedwigsheart89
schedule May 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great story I wish it was completed
person Butterflyie
schedule October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I am in love with this story have you abandoned it after this chapter ? I couldn't find where it says the last time you updated was. I would really love for the story to continue.
person Butterflyie
schedule October 30, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sorry my email was wrong on my last review. I would really like to continue with this s story if that's what you're doinf.
person 'razur
schedule August 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this story. I have to apologize usually I only review at the end of the story instead every chapter so this may be I oly time yo hear from but I have a question before I sing your praises! Is Damon an ex-marine or a former marine? There is a difference in case you didn't know, it all in how they were discharged from The Corp. To call a former marine(honourable discharged with all honours) an ex-marine(one who was dishonourable discharge) is a high insult. You have used both phrases so I was wondering?
On with the review......It is also good to see another good story out this type of lifestyle, many just want to bring S&M into the story so they a can abuse the characters of the story not understanding that Lifestyle or why anyone would choose to live it. NOt only that but you came up with a good reason for Harry and Severus to be in USA and without loosing their essence keep the story entertaining. Not only that but you also didn't just take your chosen people and place them in the story with no reference to their Hogwarts/england life.


Overall really liking this story.
person Dawnn
schedule April 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Is this ever going to get finished?