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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait for the next chapter!!
great story
great story
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You definately have my attention... please continue and hopefully with longer chapters! This is going to be great! I can\'t wait to read more!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job so far! Very intriguing, can\'t wait to read the next chapter. =)
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far and look forward to how it will develop from here. Please remember to give a warning if there will be rape though.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What\'s going to happen next? Please continue this. This is so good. I love this story.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting, I\'ll be keeping an ey on it. Good job and update ASAP! :D
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are souch a good writer!! please update soon!!