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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The Blaise/Draco exchanges were excellent. Where is Ginny getting the alcohol? I got the impression it might be from someone in Slytherin? Maybe Hermione should mind her own business if she\'s not going to be an actual friend to Ginny.
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I\'m really enjoying reading your story. Hope to see more soon!
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June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been following your story, and I think you might want to give us a bit more of what is going on in Ginny\'s head. Yes, she drinks when the trio dismiss her. Any dreams for her future? What is going to change when the others graduate? Is she still playing Quidditch? Do any of the boys in her year like her? I know Draco is around, but who is he sleeping with?
The prologue is wonderful, but with that as a starting point, you might want to let the tension build a little. Do they ever see each other during the day? Ginny needs help with Potions, or they have a collision at Quidditch and end up in the infirmary? Small suggestions, but it\'s your story. Have fun with it.
The prologue is wonderful, but with that as a starting point, you might want to let the tension build a little. Do they ever see each other during the day? Ginny needs help with Potions, or they have a collision at Quidditch and end up in the infirmary? Small suggestions, but it\'s your story. Have fun with it.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning.......poor Draco.........poor Ginny..........Damn Lucius and Voldedork!!