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Loved the concept of this book I really did but someone who is a virgin isn't going to jump straight into not only Anal sex but double penetration with barely any preparation Blaise told her well make sure your ready for him due to his size but barely touched her ? Doesn't make sense 

O+. Hot! Wishing for more! Honestly, more than just hot "smut". Would love to have more of this story or another version. I like the parings & like the caring & like the "smut"! Written better then most. Too bad the author isn't still around!

wow that was good.

please write another.

he he he. I checked out the site since you mentioned it. Finally, I can review this fic! Loved it! Now I'll try to review it elsewhere...again! Thanks for the heads up on this site.
Kelly

U HAVE to write more fics like this one - because this is certainly a threesome classic smut already...

This was so hot!!!! Please mail me when you update. I\'d love to join your jl too. The person that she mentions as the 1 who got her into d-g-b is draca on here. If you decide to read her other stuff or want the story undecided complete (there are a few glitches with the story on here) she\'s dracademented on FF.

Please keep writting!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very sweet and good - no wait, in that sentenve good doesn\'t sound right. The story was very good, and I ould love to see more of your work.

Oh and the title, right, I knew I\'d forgotten something. Let\'s see, your plot isn\'t about some action/suspense/fight-the-evil drama o that takes away some commonoptions. The central focus is - well I\'m gonna skip the blah blah, but how about Dream Come True? Corny, yeah, but the first I could think of. Found Dream? Dream Come True (I kill myself)? Or just \'Dream\' or something, I think it should focus on Dream, accented by finding/acheiving type words - I mean, Losing the Dream(and this is the title of a book) wouldn\'t be suitable right, so. Hope this helped. Writing stories is hard/. Finding titles, I like that. Wait, are my titles corny? Other people\'s titles anyway, which I of course don\'t have much chance to do.

ohhh I really hope thats not the end. you have the beginnigs of an amazing plot line. Please continue

Love the story, can\'t wait for the sequel...I did a search for your friend, dracademented on the site, and the search came up blank...what\'s her username on this site?