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for His Master\'s Voice

by Ravenkiss2000

schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You write brilliantly. Even ships that normally squick me such as this DD/SS one are made believable and seem natural.
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i can't believe i haven't found this before!!!
I really enjoyed this a lot. I love ADSS -- it's my favorite pairing.
This had some great elements in it. I especially like the whole idea for this potion ...it's actually something i was thinking of for my snarry (not exactly but sort of) but this was very well done
I like the way you throw harry and hermione in there in the beginning to freak AD out that SS is saying those horrible things in front of them and how things turn from protecting them to protecting Severus on AD's part. And of course SS's confession - it's great stuff.
I like your other ADSS fics too - morning after, the artifact (this one is very good)....i'm not so big a fan of subjugation (I don't do evil dumbledore....no offense)

But i liked this one a lot and i'm hoping that you continue to write AD/SS....it's good for the soul.
And SOOOO few people write it and even less write it well so don't ever stop. Please.
person stephanie
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...huumm..I was not expecting that...don't get me wrong, it was really good! I loved it....just wow, sev and albus? not ur everyday slash huh? that is what made it so good though. It was different....hummm...wow..
person madwriter
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. So nice. uuuuh, it makes me so wet (sorry if that freaks you out). I wanted to say I love all your stories. You\'re one hell of a writer!! ^_^ KissKiss
person Katie K
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww that\'s so sweet! :-D