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for Last Minute Prezzie

by Nigelsfairymidwife

person Angel
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sooo sweeeet! oooooohhhh *big sigh* Love the sweetness.
person marie
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good, keep up the good work.
person antipyro
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yes the wonderful effects of pregnancy! What a way to get comfortable!

Very well written, I can\'t wait for more chapters.
person Kaitlin
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great i absolutly love it...was it Severus or Harry that carried the other childern?
person antipyro
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this could be a longer fic, i.e. a longer first chapter or several short ones, and go into the loving relationship that only childbirth can bring between two people. But anyways, it was well put together and very endearing. It seems that Severus would make a great parent and take extremely good care of his children.

I really liked this, thank you.
person Marie
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was nice, hope to read more.