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for Three\'s A Crowd

by Ravenkiss2000

person Calcifer
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. I loved the ending with Harry accidentally getting Severus pregnant again. I daresay that curse must be highly inconvenient for all parties involved, having to watch every word they say, just in case.

It was kind of unfortunate that Draco was completely insane and the rest of the mini-death eaters were truly evil enough to warrant death or Azkaban.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great story loved it.
person TheFrench
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've really adored this history is very original!

* Sorry for the mistakes, I'm French and not very gifted in English ^^' *
person amducias
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! When I begun to read your story I didn't expected to spend the WHOLE NIGHT in front of my computer, but, well, I simply COULDN'T STOP READING, I became "Three's A Crowd"-addict from the beginning to the end!

It was just an excellent idea, an excellent scenario, and you did so well with "mixing" action and emotion that was impossible to get bored! And what to say about the story-ending...Bravo!

Really, congratulations! I wish there were more fics like this one!

PS: excuse me for my poor english, it's not my first language AND KEEP WRITING!!!
person JJ
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!! You painted a realistic picture of 4 men with a tortured pasts falling in love, or is that lust? Plus, I'm a succor for happy, fluffy endings. And yours was a blast!!!
person senya_kinowari
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, i'll say this is the most wonderful fic that i've ever read. Are you going to write a sequel? because that would be great.
i must say that you're one of my favorites writers. have a nice day and life.
person nadia885
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Such a cute story!! i loved the ending. Maybe you can make a part 2
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bloody fantastic story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading every chapter!
person Darkladynyara
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, this was great. I esecially liked this part:

\"If you even think of suggesting anything having to do with myself naked while Black is a dog, I will hex you into next week.\"
\"What I meant was that you can be around him, and touch him. If we persuade Harry to touch you...\"
\"And if we persuade the Dark Lord that violence is not the answer, he might join a monastery and work for the betterment of the mankind.\"

But seiriously, this was amazing. It takes an all too rare amount of skill to pull off something like that. And the ending was great.
person stacey
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WRITE A SEQUAL!