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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Harry wanted to go to him and tell him how sorry he was, but he knew it wasn
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was strangely fascinating. The emotions are very well expressed. It didn't feel like a lemon much, more like Draco is physically releasing his emotional pain. I know this is a one shot, but I really want a sequel. ><
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still think you should add to this story.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
1st h/d? well congrats! you blew us all away by the plot and such. i loved the angst... especially at the end. i like the way there was a play-by-play between the smut and the executions. very clever in my opinion. i just wonder why noone noticed harry and draco going at it... if i was there i would have noticed i think! i\'m suprised it\'s only a one-shot since i feel it has potential to be more than one chapter. hope to read more of your works soon!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m guessing that was Harry with Draco earlier. If so, then why did Harry\'s thoughts go bitter and angry at the end. If it wasn\'t Harry then who was it? They had Quidditch hands? Hmm. Can\'t wait for chapter 2!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I know you said this was a one shot... but I\'d love it if you\'d expand on this.
I can\'t believe this is your first! It held me to the end. Wonderful job.
~Reba
I can\'t believe this is your first! It held me to the end. Wonderful job.
~Reba
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just the perfect amount of angst - yes, i\'m a sadistic bastard when it comes to Draco ^_^ - to kick this story to an awesome start... umm, you *are* considering to write the next chappie, aren\'t ya?
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That was amazingly well written... so heart-wrenching... I actually feel very bad for Draco. I hope you continue this. I am quite interested in seeing where your plot bunnies want to take this story. Anyways, good job and I look forward to reading more of this.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh very good, sequal? cya xx
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh very good, sequal? cya xx