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by museofmonotony

person Amene
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say that this fic got my attention. ^^ I love the way you write *____* And yes, there are many fics where Harry goes back in time and so on, but I love them ^^

And this time it wasn\'t an accident, the reason Harry went back in time I mean x) ^^ That was a good thing <333

Well.. I didn\'t find any mistakes, wich isn\'t suprise because my real languege isn\'t english x) So.. Don\'t care if my spelling is wrong ^^

The point is, that I like this fic and I will be waiting for you to continue ^^ .. *hugs* .... (I\'ll be watching~~~... not.)

Byebye~~ (And I almost got something useful feedback. ... Almost.)

person Cecilie
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im reading and I like it.......how\'s that for a brilliant review??
-hihi
person JJ
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi. This story is very interesting. I\'ve stayed away from Harry goes to the past stories, but couldn\'t resist one so well written. So Harry is fragile on the inside, but showing his age as well. What an interesting concept. How would it feel to spend you life, give up your life to prepare for a war you hope to win - and find out all you have left at the end of the day is a someone\'s death. I hope spending time with the original mauraders and his mother will help him see that he has not wasted his life. I hope he returns renewed, refreshed, and with hope for the life he can build with Draco.

I\'d love to Beta for you. With your writing style, it would be an easy job!
person Anon
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good! But what exactly is his mission? Why did he have to go back in time? Keep writing! Can\'t wait for the update!
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter was a good start
person Missi
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far!! I can\'t wait to read more of it!! Please update soon, cause this just so rocks!!
person ningchan
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like!
poor harry with no draco there for a year!
how will he cope! keep it up
love ning