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by museofmonotony

schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was wonderful. I think the chapters lengths are fine as is.
person a dragonbreath
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh...... Thank you! nice twist at the end of two... and if you do find out about other time traveling stories, please tell us.

I like the possibility of Snape and Harry\'s student-teacher relationship being switched. Should be an interesting way to find out Snape\'s motivations.

I wonder if it\'s Snape that causes Harry not to return to the future... or the mauraders (sp?)

Nice work and keep it coming.
person acr
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting.
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So what happens in chapter 1?
person Jade
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo, I like it! Do you know how long the story is gonna be? I promise I\'ll follow the whole way! >_<
person a dragonbreath
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more. Soon.
person Ghonchi (2 lazy 2 sign in)
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I read it! ^^
I think it\'s really good, not so alike all those other back to the past ficcies. I\'m so curious to see how it ends up!
I can say anything about your writing style yet, since I prefer to have a few chapters so I\'ll know what I\'m talking about.
It seems good so far, like your descriptions and all, keep it up! d^^b

(BTW I don\'t hate AN\'s, I love them, well, I do if they\'re funny ^^)
person thrnbrooke
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 1! This is very very interesting!
person sbka
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...Deeply introspective and fearful Harry...when will he meet Snape and Lucius?
person TrixRStrange
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant start. Yeah, you\'re right there\'s an asstonne of those kind of fics out there, but each one of them stands out in their own way. Can\'t wait to read the rest.

Love, Hugs and Bludgers,

Trix ^_^