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by museofmonotony

person a dragonbreah
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More please!

And I couldn\'t get that profile link (http://www.fanfiction.net/~bandgeek2006) to work to get to your yahoogroup. :( Why isn\'t it in your profile here?
person the beta
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just go to http://groups.yahoo.com/group/museofmonotonyhd Sorry for any inconvience. I put up my profile page for various reasons but yeah. Here it is. We would love it if you joined!
Beth
person sak
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You may consider this cliched plotline, but it is well-written and well-plotted with lots of twists and turns. The characters in Harry\'s parent\'s time are well-drawn and realistic. I did not expect Harry\'s fear to be Draco and that is a monkey wrench in his Time Travel. Nor did I expect that Lupin would be peeved at the professor. I liked that you tied in things to Harry\'s past and present--the glimpse of the first stirrings of attraction, Draco\'s worry for Harry adn especially, Harry\'s contemplation of his expectations after the defeat of Voldemort--that his insecurities and that would disappear. I am really enjoying this and cannot wait for more.
person Akusaa
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read this story, and it\'s great! Oooh, what WILL they say when they see the name Haryy Potter? And what about DRACO and Harry? lol, update soon please!
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why is Draco Harry\'s greatest fear? Need chapter 5 please!
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the chpater was great!
person Metranome
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m very much intrigued by what you have so far, and I\'m looking forward to more. Good Writing to you.
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man. i like this a lot. and i already read HBP so update already! geez.

and i mean that nicely. i <3 you!
person thrnbrooke
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happened? I can\'t wait for chapter 3!
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was good. Poor Draco...wasnt he the one who talked Harry into it in the first place?