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oh they better be over!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok so there i was happily reading you fic when all of a sudden there was no next button!!!!! Please update soon, your fic is awesome

*sighs contentedly* I love you.

Draco is turning into a psycho...it\'s kinda scaring. Anyways, if I were writing this fanfiction here\'s what I would have happen: The baby turns out to have red hair and everybody realizes it\'s Ron\'s. Draco turns into a psychopath and tries to kill Ron and Hermione but when he fails he kidnaps the baby and dyes it\'s hair bleach blond(poor baby)and runs away to france. Hermione becomes depressed and delusional...but then...7 years later she sees her daughter at a store in paris and tells Ron so both of them try to get their baby back and it turns into a series of events that lead up to Ron\'s death. Yes I know it would be like a lifetime movie but I think it would be cool :) Anyhow, back to the review...I think this story is nice. It has the right amount of drama and thr right amount of humor so good job :)

As always smut is always welcome, however I am very anxious to see what happens with their little cheating episodes, whether they will fess up or find out by different means. Please update again SOON. :)

Hi. I found this story today and its taken my 4 hours to read all 33 chapters. It is absolutely amazing. I really love this story. You are such a good writer. I personally feel you\'ve included just enough sexual content to make the story work. The rape scene was shocking and moving to read. The entire storyline has had me completely absorbed. The pregnancy thing is cool aswell-Hermione isnt liking being \'fat\' is she? Hehe. Love it! I just wana carry on reading it. Please post the next chapter asap. Well done *claps*

I think that was a very good place to put this chapter and really added to the story. They needed to make up in some way and a nice bout of love making is often the best way to feel closer to the person you love when you\'re not doing so well at the moment. Now all they need to do is be mature enough to talk about what happened and why they did what they did and move on from it without making it into a huge deal and just realize that everyone makes a mistake sometimes, especially when stress and hormones get put together. The only problem I had with the Ron scene is that he\'s her rapist. But he was the most likely candidate for her to cheat on Draco with if she cheated on anyone and in reality Hermoine cheated a lot less than Draco did but who it is and the problems behind that will probably cause Draco to erupt again unless he can understand why it happened. I really hope that Hermoine can talk to Draco about how she\'s feeling about her self image since that\'s such a normal part of pregnancy that almost every woman goes through.

I love this story but Ron! omg... i want them to happy! yey! please please update soon!

geo~

Wow, that\'s so amazing!! I can\'t wait to read more of it!!

that was a great chapter and that is one way to make up .. well i cant wait in till the next time you update sooo please update sooon please ... well in till next till later

angel