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for A Twisted Web We Weave

by harriet

person Squallsama
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic--It hink it has to be the best you\'ve written so far! Please, write more soon....? I\'d hate to see this one die.
person Amaya
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy!!! =^_^= *hugs you and story* I really did like how this story was going and it made me so upset when you took it down. I am so thankful you decided to give it another chance....even if you don\'t seem overly happy about it. ^_^! I truly am sorry that some people have given you hell about your stories.

I don\'t mind any other hints of pairings that might appear. The more sexual situations the better.

I feel so sorry for Draco. They just keep getting meaner and meaner with him. Now they are even beating him up and humiliating him by not leaving him a place to sit at their table. That really pissed me off. I guess because I know what it feels like. I have had something similar happen to me. I am glad Snape has finally decided to get his head out of his ass and help Draco. I understand the guy is pissed at him but it is not like Draco knew what he was getting into. Snape is very bad about misdirecting his rage. I am pretty sure I know what Snape is going to have to do with Draco and the poor guy is going to need a little support. At least Snape has finally opened his eyes and is helping him.

Now Harry is loosing it. @_@ Well I have to admit I like that in this story Harry is not the one on the receiving end of the abuse for once. Not even really from Snape. Yeah I know poor Draco is suffering in his place but it is interesting to see the places switched and things going a little easier on Harry.

I really like what Julius adds to this story. There is so much mystery surrounding him. I really like the interest he seems to find in Harry. That seems to bring out a little bit of Snape\'s jealous over Harry too. At least to me. ^_^! Maybe I just see it because I want to though. I can\'t wait to find out what that collar is for. This sudden addiction to Julius and Harry\'s reaction to Snape\'s touch has me intrigued as well.

I can\'t wait for more updates. *bounces* I don\'t mind if it takes you a while to update as long as I know you are going to finish. =^_^= Thank you sooo much for continuing!!!! Hope you get a chance to update soon!!!
person Jolene
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really glad you reposted this story. I was reading it before and I was bummed when you took it down. Please continue this, it is good.
person antipyro
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH, NOOOOOO! Don\'t leave it there.......Eleven chapters and this is sooooo good, I need to know what spell Julius has over Harry. PPPPLLLLLEEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEEE!!!!!!!

......and Severus\' and Harry\'s mutual trust, even though it\'s not spoken or even acknowledge by either, is definately a step in the right direction.

I really like this character of Julius, he\'s soooo sinister! Just Thrilling!!!!

Please, the temptation you are weaving here is insidious, as always, but this is especially so, ummm, dramatic?.... no; ummm touching?.....no; ummmmm scintilating?....yeah, that\'s almost it......nerve wracking? YES!!!!! .....but oh so enjoyable.

Please post soon. I can\'t imagine that I haven\'t read this before if it\'s a repost, I\'ve looked up your work and didn\'t see it, hmmmmm, \"check, check and double check\"..... LOVE IT!!!!

person kaji11
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back with your fic, and don\'t you dare leave again! No, seriously, it\'s good and I really want to know what\'s coming next.
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Its back! And I love the new chapters. Harry and Draco should like put what they saw in a pensive or something and show severus, or take vetriserum ((sp?)) or something. Or at least talk to Severus, i think he\'d believe them. Did Julius let the fire demon into the school?

Love the fic so far! Ignore my rambling above, just writing down my thoughts, lol. Cant wait for the next update!

Love it Riffraff! - Jess
person Eowynselixure
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! love it, love it, love it, God the dueling club scenario was cringe worthy and DSraco\'s so cool and WHATS going on with Harry?

If you don\'t update soon I\'ll go insane and send you the bill! NO JOKE!!!

SO UPDATE!!!

*Eowyns elixure
person Chys
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! *Iloveallyourharrypotterfics*
person alliekatgal
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, we\'re happy to see this story back! The new chapters are great. Julius appears to be a baddie, quite the opposite of what I originally thought he would be. Looking forward to finding out more of this sensation issue between Severus and Harry, and to find out what Julius did to make Harry drawn to him.