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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!!! You have to add more chapter\'s. It\'s getting great
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW, where have I been? Two chapters to cherish and salivate over. Too Much!
And what chapters they were. The mesmerizing of Snape\'s thoughts as he slowly choked out Draco - absolutely powerful! The drain Harry feels in complying with Julius\' requests/orders and the skill Harry shows in leaving a message for Severus - ahhhh, true love! All of this expertly written and greatly appreciated.
No, you don\'t have to get out more, just keep writing, I\'ll let you know if anything happens....ummmm, nope, nothing yet.
Thanks.
And what chapters they were. The mesmerizing of Snape\'s thoughts as he slowly choked out Draco - absolutely powerful! The drain Harry feels in complying with Julius\' requests/orders and the skill Harry shows in leaving a message for Severus - ahhhh, true love! All of this expertly written and greatly appreciated.
No, you don\'t have to get out more, just keep writing, I\'ll let you know if anything happens....ummmm, nope, nothing yet.
Thanks.
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaahhhhh!!! *comforts Draco* I figured the whole mentor thing was going to deal with sex but not like this. @_@ I guess the roughness is required seeing as what it is training for. Still it seems to me that Snape was primarily doing it to show Draco what a bad decision he was making about his life. Could Snape have not just simply talked to Draco about all this first and only used that sort of cruelty as a last resort. Just when things get a little better for poor Draco they crash back down in his face again. I am a little confused about this line though. \"This was exactly why he didn
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, all I can say is...
MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!!
Please!?!
MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!!
Please!?!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well. Pleases me that in this ficcie Draco isn\'t EXACTLY the manwhore he was in the Where Others Fear To Tread. XD It\'s a bit difficult to be on a Draco-the-Manwhore hating rampage when your favorite pairing is HPDM... Update soon?
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh gods Riffraff. Excellent, EXCELLENT two chapters! Wow. Goodness I\'m dying to know where Julius is taking Harry, and how the explosions will effect hogwarts. Ooh goodness this fic is just too good!
Love it! - Jess
Love it! - Jess
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello. WOTS going on? I get that Harry has been taken by Julius coz Julius is a bounty hunter, I get the package was a bomb. HOW did Sev work it out? Coz that went over my head completely along with why Harry would have written all his suspicions n shit in his POTIONS diary.
Poor Draco!!!!!!
No worries its just me being thick - EXCELLENT chapter MUST have MORE!!!
*Eowyns elixure
Poor Draco!!!!!!
No worries its just me being thick - EXCELLENT chapter MUST have MORE!!!
*Eowyns elixure
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man this is intense. I love it. Hope Julius doesn\'t hurt Harry. Hope Sev and the rest find him before anything happens. Really looking forward to reading more.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You reposted Brilliant. I love this story, its full of twist and turns. Bloody brilliant
no other words. Update soon, I have got to know who\'s behind this.
Best wishes.
no other words. Update soon, I have got to know who\'s behind this.
Best wishes.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Riffraff, this story is so good, it\'s unbelievable. It grabbed me when I first read, but now it\'s just
as Ron would say \"Bloody Brilliant\". More please. Mind don\'t forget the other story either I was enjoying
that as well. Absolutely wonderful story telling, thank you.
as Ron would say \"Bloody Brilliant\". More please. Mind don\'t forget the other story either I was enjoying
that as well. Absolutely wonderful story telling, thank you.