rate_review Reviews

Oh Yeah! This is kinky smut as it ought to be written! Nicely done. :) I\'d say more but I find that I have to, uh, take a short break now... ;)

Ch 4 - yay, you finished the story!! What, you mean SEVERUS gets a turn next? Didn\'t think he\'d be a switcher, but I\'ll read your story when you write it. I\'m glad she finally got her release - do they keep records? I can see Hermione as trying to always improve her achievements, wanting to go longer each time, etc. Thanks for writing and posting!!!

I am amazed at the complete accuracy of your story. I had very little doubt that you had some personal experience at being a submissive even before it was mentioned at the end of chapter 3. It seemed unlikely that you would be able to write her desire so well if you had none. I also am amazed at the number of people who read these stories and expect that being a submissive would be out of character for Hermione, when in reality it is very likely she would be one. I have found, myself included, that most true submissives are completely controlling in all other parts of their lives and therefore relish the feeling of not being in control. I would also have to say that you perfectly keeped Snape in character with Canon and yet expressed beautifully the fact that the submissive, although lacking in control, is the one with all of the power. VERY well done. -- B

Ch 3 - seven hours???? I\'d be ready to jump his bones by then! BTW, that\'s a nice collar inscription. The website you recommended is offline - perhaps your referrals maxed out their server! (heh-heh!) Good luck on your E&M exam tomorrow!

this truly is yummy.

but then again, people tell me
i\'m twisted.

thanks for the lovely read.

~blessings~
ldf

more, please! Very hot!

Wow... That was hot. More please.

meanie! mean mean mean mean
MEAN!

what a horribly cliffie and it was
mean of you to leave it there.

now i\'m hooked. i love that Snape
is so damned evil. that is how i
see him whenever i try to write him.
(which is often, let me tell you)

i look forward to more.

~blessings~
ldf

Ch 2 - \"He

Oh he is so cruel to make her wait so long.....please update asap....this is great!