rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Wanna go out Cutie, my name is Joe Pacheco. Sounds cool right I\'m 30.

A little confussed and still guessing on the plot, but over all I think its turning out nicely. A lil\' confussed on the Harry and Hermione relationship, but I like it. lol! Keep it coming, I\'ll be watching fo it!

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That fic was incredibly stupid... if a Malfoy always gets what he wants, he wouldn\'t be a coward about it. That was out of character for Draco, especially out of character for him to not speak up, being that he\'s one of the most out-spoken characters in the book. Now I\'m not saying happy endings are necessary, but to make the characters act differently so you can have the story you want is poor writing. All in all it was a mediocre story. Just try to keep it in character next time.

that is great, i like the second ending better, have to go to dinner though, i\'ll help you out if you need it, with love guin

nooooo make it a happy ending. anyway, it was a good story.

Hehe, I never expected you to actually go back and make revisions, but I must admit, I do like the change. I believe, (and keep in mind, these are only my opinions, I can be 100% wrong for all I know,) you depicted Draco a lot better in telling off Pansy, because of my view that no matter how wrong or biased Draco\'s views are/were, he never had a problem expressing them. I\'m glad you made the change, it really fits the story better in my opinion. I really look foward to your updates :) And I hope I wasn\'t too harsh on you, I didn\'t mean to make you feel obligated to change your story, being that it\'s your story, not mine. But I do like the alterations! Good Job :)

god i am loving this angsty story! i mean...who could hate it! god plz update!

The way you start off with these two chapter i think this is going to be a great story. I hope you will update soon.