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for Ambrosia Salad

by LadyKeri

person Faelin
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gods, this is hot. Please continue!!!! I'm intrigued.

Very lovely writing style, by the way.

I adore this story. Thank you.
person Meg
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, this fic is amazing so far!! PLease, PLEASE write more chapters and soon!! I love this fic!!!! Harry and Draco are the cutest, I was so waiting for one of them to make the first move!!!!
person Leeann
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So few reviews for such a good story? That is truely a crime. I very much enjoy the different elements of the story: the suspence, humour, and romance. Could do with slightly less obnoxious Ron though.
person Calena
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, usually I would be really mean and not bother reviewing (laziness prevents it, you see) but I felt that I had to. It\'s so hard to find a good Harry Potter fic, but I found one! And it\'s 1:19, I\'m working in 6 hours but I\'ve been reading this and it\'s v v v v good. Also, thank you for printing the words to \'Michael\'. I love that song but have never known what the words were, so when I sang along, I just looked like a muppet. Actually, I could have just looked up the lyrics on the net, couldn\'t I? (I\'m assuming that you\'re American because you spell \'grey\' \'gray\'. I\'m curious; are Franz Ferdinand quite big over there? I love them, being fellow Scotsmen and simply fabulous music dudes. They\'re one of my favourite bands, them and Green Day, Coldplay, Kaiser Chiefs... Oh, and The Killers.)
Anyways, I\'ll let you go now, you probably have better things to do than read my pointless review and I have to go back to worrying that underneath my chin feeling swollen isn\'t a symptom of mumps or glandular fever (It\'s not, is it? God I hope not! Oooh, but I would get the day off work!)
Keep on writing! Feed the slash (I can\'t believe that I actually know what that means!) fiend in me!
person Requiem528
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...wow. Your story is awesome. I love your descriptions of HD dancing. Update soon.
person Pamela
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Jesus, Woman! You\'re trying to kill me, aren\'t you? What a way to go, though, eh? ^____^ I am in total awe of this story and love every word of it!! Can\'t wait for the next chapter =)
person ewchy
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is AWESOME please I want more!!! * makes cute puppy dog eyes at the author who doesn\'t want to update quicker *
person nony
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Scoooore! I was waiting for you to update! I first read this back on schnoogle and thought you had stopped writing. Thank goodness you didn\'t!! I love this story--it\'s so sensual and very captivating. Nice!
person War-chan
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh No!!! Lord V. smiled!!!!! That\'s NEVER a good sign!!!!!!!!! ^_^ Love is story, PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!

Ja ne
IHopeDraco\'sUkeWhenItBecomesSlash!Please?
Miss War-chan ^_~
person soucieuse
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Your descriptions are just fantastique. I actually have the feeling that I\'m with them in the club, I almost hear the music, see the lights. It is like I\'m there. Dancing is not my favorite activity but you make it so fun and sensual that I want to go out. And I love that even if you don\'t review very fast, at least you post big chapters. good job, really