schedule
June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should get a beta for some of the little grammatical errors, but for a first fanfiction this is quite good, and I hope you choose to continue.
schedule
June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I really loved this fic, it was soooo... and... and also... arghhh! =) Well I think that said it all. Oh, and do continue please! I would love to see this passion in action! ;)
Thanx again, keep up the good work!
hugs!
- ss -
I really loved this fic, it was soooo... and... and also... arghhh! =) Well I think that said it all. Oh, and do continue please! I would love to see this passion in action! ;)
Thanx again, keep up the good work!
hugs!
- ss -
schedule
June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Splendid, my dear....I think this is the best piece of writing I\'ve ever seen from you (not sure what it says about you that the best thing I\'ve seen from you borders on porn... :) ). Do write more...