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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, come on! Surely you aren\'t going to leave us like this?
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was cute, and I definitely would not be opposed to more, you should seriously consider continuing this :)
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed that :)
Itching for more
Itching for more
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First time? No. You lie. :) Loved it. You discriptive style is perfect, and I firmly believe you should continue the story :)
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You can\'t possibly leave that as it is. You MUST write some lemons to go with the dish water. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice - good insight into characters thoughts - wish it were Chapter one, not a one-shot!
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have to continue this storyline! I\'m dying to know what becomes and Severus and Hermione? Does she follow him to his room? Does he play hard to get and avoid her? Please continue!!!!!
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I couldn\'t resist....I had to play the song as I read this. I loved it :)....I love that song.......*happy feelings*
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I paractically squeeked when I saw \"The Dresden Dolls\" in your summary- they happen to be one of my favorite bands. You wrote this piece beautifully, from emotions, to the song, to character motions.
It would however be funny to seen Snape\'s reaction to Girl A, as you so briefly noted. Now there, that would be a site to behold. Or maybe Mandy Goes to Med School, interesting imagery.
It would however be funny to seen Snape\'s reaction to Girl A, as you so briefly noted. Now there, that would be a site to behold. Or maybe Mandy Goes to Med School, interesting imagery.
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. You have to add another chapter. Will something else happen between Snape and Hermione? I have to know.
Tiffany
Tiffany