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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why must you torture me so....you have to update this story.....it my favorite kinky fic out there.....hehe.....hope your next chapter is on the way because I\'m really looking forward to your next one...-Cyn
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Keep it up. Though you might want to know that you quite often spell \"known\" as \"no\"
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! some more bondage would be nice. ;)
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story please fuck more ginnys
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well just read all the chapters in one go, really good. Bit weird, but it works, although def AU! really like all the interactions, but please leave it without the guys screwing each other too, its hot with just the women, and the DP etc!
Only thing I don\'t like about the story side is the interaction with Colin - all I kept thinking about was, if I was him, I would make another copy for me, maybe you could write that in, and that Ron and Harry kick the crap out of him? Or I bet Ginny could do some serious damage!
Slight problem with understanding some sentences (thing there is a mistake where you mean to write Happy, but put Harry...) But its kinda fun to try to work out what its supposed to be!
So overall, very well done and keep up the good work!
Frag
Only thing I don\'t like about the story side is the interaction with Colin - all I kept thinking about was, if I was him, I would make another copy for me, maybe you could write that in, and that Ron and Harry kick the crap out of him? Or I bet Ginny could do some serious damage!
Slight problem with understanding some sentences (thing there is a mistake where you mean to write Happy, but put Harry...) But its kinda fun to try to work out what its supposed to be!
So overall, very well done and keep up the good work!
Frag
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi there
I\'ve been really enjoying your story - more please. As a suggestion can you make the twins gay - the guy guy action could act as a counterbalance to the hot hetero and lez action and explain why they aren\'t in on the family fucking
I\'ve been really enjoying your story - more please. As a suggestion can you make the twins gay - the guy guy action could act as a counterbalance to the hot hetero and lez action and explain why they aren\'t in on the family fucking
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now it\'s completely decadent! please update soon
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man your sick and twisted... i like that. keep up the great story
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweeet! I love the whole involvement of the family thing going on its super hott. Keep it up
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the part where you had everyone having a Christmas Orgy.