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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok rons mom should not be in any of these
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Best story ever! Love the Hagrid part...hes my fave.
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December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this chapter needs a bit of editing. Even for a story of pure smut, it felt too rushed. You finished al three scenes too quickly, and I specially lamented it at the last one, because it was something I was greatly looking forward to. The twins should have played with Ginny some more, and one of them should at least have rammed her ass. Hermione's scene would have looked sexier and naughtier if she had teased Hagrid for a while before going for it, then later resisted Fang a bit before surrendering. And at the last scene, besides being too short, one of the cocks magically switched from Ginny's mouth to her ass, it was a turn off.
I'm sorry to be so critic. I think the main problem is that you're going into the sex too quickly, and forgetting about building up tension. Still, even if Hermione's scene in Hagrid's hut was too fast, it was a good variation. For future chapters, how about making Ginny streak from Harry and Ron's dorm to hers next morning? And how about Hermione and Ginny perform a duo striptease for the Gryffindor boys (and you could add Lavender and Parvati, too, to have more girls)? Also, it'd be a blast if Hermione somehow ends naked in Potions and Snape uses the chance to collect her juices for potions ingredients. Finally, what about Harry challenging Cho Chang to a game of catch-the-snitch with forfeits (first stripping her bit by bit, then sexual acts, and finally making her go back to the castle in the buff. At some point, you could even make an audience appear)?
I'm sorry to be so critic. I think the main problem is that you're going into the sex too quickly, and forgetting about building up tension. Still, even if Hermione's scene in Hagrid's hut was too fast, it was a good variation. For future chapters, how about making Ginny streak from Harry and Ron's dorm to hers next morning? And how about Hermione and Ginny perform a duo striptease for the Gryffindor boys (and you could add Lavender and Parvati, too, to have more girls)? Also, it'd be a blast if Hermione somehow ends naked in Potions and Snape uses the chance to collect her juices for potions ingredients. Finally, what about Harry challenging Cho Chang to a game of catch-the-snitch with forfeits (first stripping her bit by bit, then sexual acts, and finally making her go back to the castle in the buff. At some point, you could even make an audience appear)?
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yo check some story named Molly and Ginny. The guy is ripping off the first chapter of your story. Same wording none the less. Anyway great story so far. Can't wait for more
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Niice! Been awhile but the wait was worth it keep it up yo
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering when Ginny would be caught.....Considering shes fucking almost all the time but then again whos complaining.....Well except for tht old bastard Dumbledore....
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great. They had hot sex. And even better, in public. And even better, they got caught. This story is great fun and really hot. Keep it coming. I hope Harry and Ginny end in more embarrassing situations.
Is there any chance Harry and Ginny do some threesomes? One with another girl (Hemione or Cho, for example) and one with another boy (Ron or Draco or even Sirius)
Is there any chance Harry and Ginny do some threesomes? One with another girl (Hemione or Cho, for example) and one with another boy (Ron or Draco or even Sirius)
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! More more!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Incest,Anal,Gangbang and what not?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! I really love this story
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October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story but PLEASE update.