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for The Kindly Ones

by Phorcys

person Saske\'s Iris
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do you know how much i want a review? really i need one like so much this story is too good to be true and I must know what happened to the other kindly ones is william lovettes one cuz he got skills. OH my gosh I love your sense of humor too, witty combacks of potter and malphoy are marvalous!!!!!!! Which is why i can\'t wait for an update!! So that someone can explain that noise that potter keeps hearing... is it like a danger signal or the thingy under hogwarts...hummmm. I love mythology! I love your new creatures and i would love and update!
person Cat
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHH WOW! this is good! really really good! please update soons! U just have to!!
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh need chapter 15! Can\'t wait for more!
person plotbunnybrat
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad to see that you are back. I love Harry\'s whip skills. Please write more soon.
person acr
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting Chapter. Glad you finally updated. Can\'t wait for more!
person Erica
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just reading your story and it seems very good. I thought I\'d just bring your attention to some things though, for example:
1. Mr Filch\'s first name is Argos, and
2. Voldemort\'s snake is called Nagini.

I am only about half way through what you have up at the moment so if by the end of it you have fixedit up then feel free to ignore me.
Right that\'s me done. TTFN!
person Saske\'s iris
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yeah ur back ur back ur back!!!! I am sooooo excited to see an new chapter and it was sooooooo good squeals of delight!!!!!!!! I hope you get to update soon cuz i just can\'t wait for another chapter aught to be funny watching draco and harry recover together in the infermery (hehe) i love the little comments you put back and forth betweent the two its just too funny! anyway looking forward to more!!!!!!!!!
person sbkar
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful to see an update...just a few more commas and I\'ll be even happier...LOL
person sbkar
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Huzzah! An update! May your internet connection be soon...
person serpentlady
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely love your idea. i can\'t wait for an update. you left quite a cliff hanger at the end there.