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for Deep Down and Dirty Thoughts . . .

by Severuslave

person missmaryrae
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha. Oh, I liked this one. It is hilarity.

I don\'t know if you need to continue it. I think it ends just fine there, but I did like reading their thoughts. It\'s an interesting POV; it allows yourself to insert yourself into their positions more easily.
person Katie K
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh! Me likey! :-) please update soon!
person Pixi
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow....

though you would think, someone with a really strong will power might make it past the notice me not spell.... hmmm someone like snape?

anyway. Looking forward to the next chappie
person Drake
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, nifty. Can\'t wait for Snape\'s thoughts.
person ivcacaur
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story has a lot of potential.
You simply must continue.
person Sicksixtysix
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good lord that\'s delicious! There had better be a few more bloody chapters or I may have to find you and lynch you. Although right now I may just have to go back and re-read it. Oh, Hermione masturbating in Snape\'s class! That must have been one hell of a plot bunny! So big thanks for writing that, I rather enjoyed it.
person Thisbe
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it and can\'t wait for the second chapter! *big thumbs up*