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for Deep Down and Dirty Thoughts . . .

by Severuslave

person rboothe
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Charming. Put a smile on my face.

Please continue.
person Bambu
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought this was a racy, titillating and creative PWPish ficlet (in two parts).
person no1auntie
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it - giggled all the way through it - can\'t wait for detention!
person Katie K
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! *happy dance*!
person Anon
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU TEASE!!!!!!!!

I WAS LOOKING FORWARD TO CH 3!~
person Pixi
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes please continue. Would love to see what happens next.
person kcj
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
definitely proceed to detention
person Greer
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM

Ha! I haven\'t had a fic make me laugh out loud in quite a while! This is really cute.
Can\'t wait to read more!
person Hannah
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, amusing story. I like, I like! You should write a nice smutty detention scene! *sigh* HG/SS smut equals heaven.
Good story, I\'m going to see what else you have written right now!
~Hannah
person silverslake
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes please! Continue!
Give them their well deserved detention, and make it hot! :D

Good story, thanx.