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by DivineAngel

person JTBJAB
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh......and the plot thickens *random cackling*

Please update soon before i go any crazier......if that is even possible *grin*
person June W
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 2 - so , you going to show us your version of Zacharias Smith? I like the way you depict the Harry-Dumbledore post-war relationship; I think it\'s plausible that Harry might not want to have anything to do with Albus, who left him with the Dursleys as a baby, etc. So Harry now lives with the Weasleys during breaks? Thanks for updating!
person Cristie
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Marriage Law stories and I like your twist on it. Poor Hermione though...just goes to show sometimes being forced is easier than choosing. Do the Purebloods get to reject the application???? Update soon.
person JTBJAB
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! BRILL CHAPTER! And please update soon!
person azulkan2
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really like the start of this. Will be eagerly waiting for the next part.
person Bambu
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you\'ve got a nice start on a fairly hackneyed challenge. You\'ve mixed up the characters who are populating your story, so its not all the standards in the same old roles. In other words, its nice to see you include houses other than Gryffindor and Slytherin. And, I like that Snape, so far, isn\'t really vicious or too familiar. I look forward to seeing where you go with it.
person yulia yamee
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i lov ur fic so far.... wen does snape com into it?? xxxx
person JTBJAB
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! A cool twist to have the Muggle born and half bloods doing the choosing!

Please update asap!
person fanficnut
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great so far, pls keep it coming!
person June
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1 - Blaise sounds like a nice fellow. I bet Snape is glad the Head Boy is a Slytherin. Please update soon!