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Can\'t wait for the next update! Write quickly...

Oh please don\'t make our Hermione into a slutty person.....please be the experience all comes from being with Blaise! Pretty please....and a thousand pleases more!

Great chapter by the way, and i love this story as i will probably say for every chapter....i look forward to your next update which i hope will be soon!

Please keep going! This is Great!

I\'m thoroughly enjoying this winding marriage tale. I\'m so glad that you haven\'t launched Hermione and Severus instantly into a relationship. There have been a number of MLC\'s which begin in that fashion, many of them excellent, and it\'s refreshing to see a slightly different \'take\' on it. Hermione\'s very smart to start her investigations in such a logical fashion... it\'s very in character as well. I also agree with your comment about her needing a little more experience before she\'s ready for Snape. It\'s a way to level the inequitable balance within their eventual pairing. Nicely done.

I like it. Keep it coming please.

Interesting take on the marriage law challenge. I like it! I can\'t wait to read more.

Tiffany

Ch 4 - are you SURE that \"Snape\'s on his way\"?? Will we still see Ernie and Zacharias? Is Blaise playing her like a bunch of other girls? Hmmm.... I think you need to write some chapters!! Get back to your desk!

This is good! Poor Snape! Can\'t wait till Hermione ask him out. Looking forward to the next chapter!

I like that you have given them time to search out a spouse. That\'s a new angle, (from what I\'ve read so far) and it seems to open possibilities for character interaction. I can\'t wait to see what you do with this, I like it.

sounds promising. I\'ll be checking back for more