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by Serpentina

schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it! i wish you will continue with it!
schedule August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww old voldie likes draco. cute

Oh, what now....," I sighed, reaching over my shoulder and tearing a piece of parchment off the back of my robes. Scrawled across it in black ink was written 'FERET SEX, 1 KNUT'. I turned back to Weasley and Potter who were doubled over now, tears of laughter streaming down their faces. "Can you get any more unoriginal?" I tsk'ed, flinging the paper at them, "Oh, and 'ferret' is spelled with two R's, you imbeciles..." That just made them laugh more, a small crowd gathering to see what had happened. I stomped off down the hall, trying very hard to keep the red from my face.

lmfao that is hilarious



"Yeah, as much as I could in the moonlight," I sat on the edge of my bed, "Tall, dark hair, dark eyes, almost as handsome as myself..."

Crabbe rolled his eyes and snorted from his seat at the chair, "You really think you're hot shit?"

"Why, yes, I do," I smiled, "That's what all the ladies tell me

haha you are very hot *winks* lol


Now I sat at Slytherin's table, prodding at a mound of hash browns and wishing I was still asleep in my dorm. I remember having the most wonderful dream about the Dark Lord taking over the school. I hadn't wanted to wake up from that. Ever


hmmm wow. bad dream



"I'm writing my own awful poetry before 'Tom' can fill this page," Goyle started scribbling something out : 'Roses are red, Violets are Blue, Draco is a fairy, And so are you'.

"Oh, that's just lovely-" I started. I was interrupted by Goyle gasping. The letters were disappearing off the page.

"Is that trick ink?" Crabbe asked, watching the page go blank.

"No, it's my quill I use every day," he eyed the book, "That was a little freakish."

lmfao funnny. love that poem haha


You asked what it wanted from you, and he said 'You' " Crabbe laughed, "I'm telling you, this guy wants your arse."

"It's starting to seem that way, Draco," Goyle snickered.


haha


I began writing something else across the page: 'And what if I don't want to be 'yours', Tom'.

"Oooo, good one," Goyle laughed.

The words came quickly, and a bit more sloppy this time.

" 'You will be mine, Draco Malfoy.' " I read aloud, not liking the harshness of the writing one bit, "Looks like I don't have a say in this."

More words appeared on the page: ' You don't.'

i loved that one




"Fuck you, Tom."
*snorts*
thats what he wants haha



nice job. i love this story so far. i hope you update soon
can you please email me when you write more? i see we cant favorite a story like on fanfiction.net


angela
person .-.
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
..=-l;plss xD
person Tricia
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!This is so good!Please,please,PLEASE,continue this soon!
person ediva
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I wished you would keep righting this story its great!!!!
person Butters
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a DAMN GOOD STORY! Yes, yes yes... You SHOULD continue! ^^ I praise you for the pairing. Very well-written. Confusing plot... You need more sex. xD
person malimillions
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah, is this chilling! Yeesh!

But it\'s interesting that the dark lord has taken such interest in draco... I\'m taking it that his tastes haven\'t changed much since he was 16? But he\'s right; Draco\'s idea of using machine guns is supurb.
person Erin
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome, I like Haunted so far please keep writing.
person heyy13
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo.. Very nice. *grins* Can\'t wait for another chapter to appear, this one came a might fast if i do so say myself. :3
person Lisn
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh Steamy!! LOL!! REALLY LOVE THE SHOWER SCENE!! BERY AWESOME!!