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for Indecent

by materialgirl

person Meredith
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love a good smut set-up!
person nevillelongbottomleaf
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sexy!!! Well-done and plausible! I\'m waiting for the next chappy.....
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think this is going to be one of the better romance stories between hogwarts students. I believe the only the writer can truly write the story. =)
person Anon
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going with the story, dosen\'t matter what the 6th book says, i want the whole story
person Shi Ryu Ai
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. THis is my first ime on AFF and I\'m glad your story is one of the first i\'ve read! I really do like it...I want to knwo what\'s goign to happen next! Please, hurry up!
person Kiasia
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read this story awhile back and after telling my girl about it I thought I\'d lend a review. Your story is on point it\'s got me interested. When are you going to update.
person carol
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would really like to see where this goes. I\'m glad your actually begininng the story instead of going right into smut. Building actually creates an explosion.
person aussa
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Like where your going with this. it\'s got \"The Teacher\" plot I\'m familiar with. Yet it different... the only thing that annoys me is the Harry/ginny thing. I mean seriously she gave that up in the 3rd book only Ron had something to say about it. Although I think your doing well anyway.
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I must say this is off to an excellent start. I\'m sure you haven\'t gotten many reviews because many people prefer pure smut but it\'s quite nice to come across a story where the characters actually are semi-developed. Go figure. I do really hope you continue this as I can tell you\'re a good writer who can make this pairing seem realistic. Really, I\'ll be checking back for an update.
person Ellie
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this site is a bit empty i just came acroos it loking for one of my favorite fics Ginny and Draco! and this fic has an amazing start something i have trouble doing with my own fics you should really continue it\'s great.... there\'s a site harrypotterfanfiction.com that you could post this on and get tons more reads and reviews but you have to update what ever you do continue plz! i was quite mad to see it end there!!!!!