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for The Beauty Found Within the Beast

by ShilohDarke

person Sorceress Black
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG whoa! that was intense! but fabulous. Pettigrew definitely had it coming as far as Im concerned though I do feel bad for Hermione because I think her conscience will rough her up a little with the whole murder thing. Thats so creepy to think that the Voldy twit could put his soul into her, but can he still do it now that Peter is dead? Isn\'t that what Hermione said and why she chose to kill him? Very very good chapter, omg how could I forget, the scene with Ginny and Sev, that was really good with the whole love confession thing, damn it Snape do something!!!!! lol can\'t wait to see what happens with them, as well as the whole Voldemort thing of course. Muy bien! keep up the fabulous work!!!! You sure know how to keep bringing me back hahahaha I love it! Oh and thanks for your concern, yeah I know I need to chill, 1 more day though and I have a day off to rest yayyyyy so hopefully I can get rid of this horid cold, flu whatever the hell it is lol.
person slymom
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. I was happy when they finally got together and admitted their feelings. You wrote a lovely scene when Lucius finally faced Narcissa and Draco. I cried it was happy and sad at the same time. Please don\'t wait too long before updating again. This is a great story!!!

Thanks and keep writing.
person JTBJAB
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a mean cliffy - but yay to Peter being dead - that may sound wrong, but he deserved it, I mean to fake his own death - good good! He was too good for Azkaban... it wouldn\'t really have been much of a punishment!

Great chapter - and no it wasn\'t too long a wait!

Oh and I hope Severus gets off his arse and makes a move on Ginny.... even though I don\'t particularly like that \'ship, I will accept it for this story. ;-)

I look forward to your next update!
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Brian Smiles*
Yay Sevie finally twigged!

*Darksoul hoots with laughter like a psycho*
Yeeeeeeeeeeees The coward is Dead Blooooooood for the Chaos god! Mwahahahahahahaha

*Brian sweatdrops*
Errrr well Bloddy Brilliant new chapters
person Lyndie578
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice transition chapter. I\'m looking forward to seeing what the group will come up with to thwart the plans of old voldiemutt. Thanks for the post!
person Alexia
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT WOW THIS WAS GOOD AND OH MY HERMIONE HAS KILLED WHO SAW THAT COMING?.... (SHOW OF HANDS....ANYONE...S..SH...SHOW OF HANDS PEOPLE) NAW IM ONLY JOKING I LOVED THIS UPDATE AS I LOVE ALL OF YOUR UPDATES AND WHAT A CLIFFIE AND OOOH WHAT ABOUT SNAPE AND GINNY THAT SHOULD BE INTERESTING AND THEY SEEM TO BE PROGRESSING I LOVE HERMIONE AND LUCIUS AND THEIR CONNECTION I CANT WAIT TO SEE THE WAY THEY HANDLE THIS KNEW HURTLE IN THEIR RELATIONSHIP. I LOVE IT AND I LOOK FORWARD TO AN UPDATE ASAP THANK YOU IN ADVANCE LOTS OF LOVE, HUGS, AND KISSES FROM YOUR EVER DEVOTED READER ALEXIA
person Pam
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great post. You are an amazing writer. Keep up the great work, and post again soon. Thanks.
person Anon
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodnesss. I love it!!!
I just want to scream and squeal.
Love, I haven\'t even finished reading it yet.
Just got to the second chapter and found the story completely fantastic.
UPDATE UPDATE
I think I am becoming infatuated with Lucius too.
It is such a lovely fic, I am so overwhelmed and awed by it, I can\'t express my feelings very well.

I hope you continue UPDATING it, write sequels, and more hermione/lucius stories.
Amazing. Great job
person Miss Melody Ann Rivers
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAK! I have no clue why, but the ending got to me, even though I knew it was coming! And my my, Herminone not only can do wandless magic, but she can do ery complex wandless magic? Hmm, maybe Hope is effecting her... Which might mean that when voldie-chan goes to take over Hope, he will also have a cetain hold over Mione-chan as well! Oh, the plot! I cann\'t wait to see if i\'m even close! Love the new update, keep em coming!
Your fan,
~Miss Melody Ann Rivers~
person angel
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooo poor hope..... hmm snape now know (some what ) that ginny like no love he i think ginny know he has the same feeling and i hope he tell her for sure .... and yeaaaaaaaaaaa the old smelly rat is dead .... i cant wait in till the next chapter sooooooooo please update soon and in till then keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel