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for The Beauty Found Within the Beast

by ShilohDarke

person Miss Melody Ann Rivers
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Happy reuions! I like the nice little GW/SS plot device you have, very nice. And do all house eves love Harry? It\'s really kinda creepy... Anyways, I\'m exactly sure how I feel about your take of the DD murder. Personaily, I think that DD did not want him too, I mena.. he was pretty much pleading for Snape to save him, not kill him. However, if Snape was evil, he diobeyed Voldie by killing Dumby.. Hmm intersting. I like that Dumby is not dead though, that had had made me *very* upset, I think Dumby should come back, just like how Siri-Kun *MUST* come back! He was favorite! Well, cann\'t wait for more!
Your fan,
~Miss Melody Ann Rivers~
person kbluesmom
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Like you I beleive that Albus made Severus promise to obey him unconditionally sometime in the past just as he had done to Harry in the later chapters of book six. Wonderful chapter by the way. I knew Harry could only be an arse for so long then his common sense would fianlly surface and his love for Hermione. I really like the way you are incorporating Ginny and Severus into this tale. You are a genius! Thanks for the updates! I am hopelessly addicted and it\'s all your fault!! ;O) !!
person JTBJAB
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, it\'s fine... I agree.. I think Dumbledore wasn\'t begging him not to kill him, but begging him to kill him for the greater good.

Glad somebody else has the same sort of idea!

This was a brilliant chapter, and I hope that Harry being there will help Hope, giving them some warning if Tom decides to pay a visit by Astral Projection.

I look forward to the next update!
person firewall
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you about Albus and Severus. Great chapter as usual, I\'m glad Harry is nearby. Hopefully he will be able to help them all thwart Voldemort.
person angel
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what was great but will someone give ginny and snape a big push please and hope will the save hope .... please update soon and in till then keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel
person Michelle
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this lucius. Ha! Snape is jealous.
person Labdhi
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Glad Hermione finally got ride of Peter though..ugh....Severus and Ginny..poor guys had a rough life, he deserves some happiness I think..if he ever wakes up that is..lol...Great job!
person frewall
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Chapter 17! Hermione! Finally someone had the guts to get rid of that snivelling little rodent. I know it will weigh upon her but it\'s about time.

BTW, yes, I think you should write about Severus and Ginny in a separate story maintaining her Guardian status.
person jamie
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beautifully written. i really can\'t wait to see where you take this story next. i enjoyed reading the first 17 chapters, i can only imagine how the others to follow will be. harry and hope huh? interesting. i hope you continue. wonderful story!
j
person kbluesmom
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That was one great chapter! You never cease to amaze me. The consistently high level of character development and plot just makes this an absolute MUST read for any one that loves fanfiction. (stands and applauds loudly) I can hardly wait for the next round!