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for The Beauty Found Within the Beast

by ShilohDarke

person angel
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~crys~ men ypu scared me half to death by killing lucius and im glad that is a descendant of merlin man ... ~sniff sniff~ man and how snape tryed to hide that he was happy to go with ginny im gald that the dark lord is a shade .. now he will have a hard time getting in to a new body and hope is safe .... i cant wait in till the sequel sooooooooo please get it up soon and in till the keep up the awesome awesome work and thank you for a awesome story now im going to reread it and see when you post the new story which i know will be just as awesome maybe more so ... well in till then later for now and remember love peace and fan fics

angel
person Trish
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WELL DONE!!! BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO!!!! Finished in a heavy way but ended on a light note.... and the opening for Severus and Ginny!! KUDOS! Take a break-- you deserve it! T
person Michelle
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD! I REALLY DID CRY. I GUESS YOU WEREN\'T THE ONLY ONE. LOL. I THOUGHT LUCIUS DIED. I LOVED WHAT MELIN SAID ABOUT LUCIUS\'S PUNISHMENT. I THINK IT\'S TRUE, IT\'S NOT THE OUTSIDE THAT COUNTS BUT HE INSIDE. WHAT YOU FEEL IS FROM THE INSIDE NOT BY THE OUTSIDE. I GUESS HERMIONE AND LUCIUS GOT AN EXTRA BONUS. LOL. I THINK HE IS A REALLY BEAUTIFUL MAN KNOW. I HOPE UP AT LEAST WRITE A LITTLE, SWEET EPILOUGE, WHEN HOPE IS BORN. I HOPE YOU DO. I LOVE YOUR STORY VERY MUCH. I ALSO HOPE YOU WRITE A NEW STORY, SAD THIS STORY IS OVER IT WAS WELL WRITEN AND REALLY GOOD. I ENJOYED IT VERY MUCH. HOPE TO HEAR FROM YOU SOON.

\"WRITE AN EPILOUGE PLEASE*BEGGS ON KNEES* LOL.
person firewall
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, a happy ending. I enjoyed it thoroughly...I did chuckle a bit though at the thought of Lucius being related to Merlin. Nice little twist. Thank you for sharing your story with us and I hope you find another story to tell.
person Narcissa Black
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was sobbing like a two year old who has spilled their candy in the mud when Lucius died. Actually, I might have cut my eyelid. Anyway, this is a great story. I have a huge soft spot for Lucius. The bad boys are so much fun.
person tonkatrish
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I have been sitting here for the last 3 hrs consuming your story. I was and still am totally enthralled. You have an amazing talent. And you have acquired a new follower. But, there is a problem...........I am itching for an update already! I love the direction you have brought both Lucius\'s strength and vulnerability out when it comes to Hermione. And kept the petulant child form of Harry, when he discovers she is not to be his. Ron is shown as the mature one---finally. So sick of everyone portraying him as the sidekick schmuck-hothead with Quidditch for brains. Please add me to your update e-mails. My hubby won\'t like that I have another to follow, but, hey.... when it comes to HP/JKR, he says---\"Woman you\'re killing me\" and I reply ---\"A slow and agonizing death\"......But he is my Lucius ( the Beast DOES have inner beauty) And in case I tend to repeat myself..please add me to your e-mail updates......and soon!! Thanks much****** Trish
person Sorceress Black
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter, very interesting to see that Voldemort plans to continue his horrid little plans, I am curious to see how that developes. Yayyyy I was so glad to see Harry come back, and I liked how he finally realized that lucius has really changed. Nice bit of tension there with Ginny and Severus, I wonder how long she will be able to resist jumping our snarky friend. All in all a nicely done chapter with a healthy dose of lemons thrown in there at the end lol. The pleasantness of it is giving me the \"calm before the storm\" feeling though, so needless to say I am itching to see what\'s going to happen next. Keep up the great work cause no matter how busy I am I always find my way back to your story. :) Shan.
person kurtcouper
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you. I think Dumbledore would have planned it. Butt... I love the new chapter. It\'s great. Poor Hermione. I don\'t think I could ever live with the knowledge of killing someone, evil or not. Anyway, I love Voldie\'s new plan. It really is perfect. <3
person Alexia
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT I HONESTLY DO THE CHAPTER JUST SEEMS TO FLOW AND MAKE PERFECT SENSE. I WILL SING YOUR PRAISES. NOW ABOUT YOUR LAST COMMENT I QUITE AGREE WITH YOU IN FACT IN MOST OF THE STORIES I HAVE BEGUN WRITING POST HBP I HAVE STATED THE SAME IF NOT SIMILAR IDEAS THAT EITHER DUMBLEDORE WANTED IT TO HAPPEN OR THEY STAGED IT OR POLYJUICED IT OR SOMETHING SO YEAH JUST TO LET YOU KNOW THAT THERE ARE OTHERS OUT THERE WHO SHARE YOUR VIEWS. ANYWHOO I REALLY ENJOYED READING THIS CHAPTER AS I ENJOY ALL YOUR WORK AND I CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT UPDATE. LOTS OF LOVE HUGS AND KISSES ALEXIA.
person dragon34
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to believe in my heart, that Severus is still a good man, and that Dumbledor was asking him to finish the job, that the poison was doing. I also have to believe that Albus petrified Harry, because he knew that something would happen, and he didn\'t want Harry to get hurt, or killed. I think thats also the reason why Albus had Harry hide under his invisibility cloak.

On a different matter. I love your story, can\'t wait to read more.