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for The Beauty Found Within the Beast

by ShilohDarke

schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was such a beautiful ending. I was crying like an idiot sitting here at my computer. When I thought for sure that it was over and he was gone, I was so sad. Then he came back and then was healed.
So great. I thought it was so fantastic.
You are such a great writer. I hope you continue to write stories about the two of them.
AWESOME!!!!
person Sorceress Black
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful sniff sniff ;). What a fantastic ending to an awesome story. MERLIN OMG that was so damn cool, and having him still alive, hey anything is possible in a fic right, and I thought it was absoultely fantastic. I was a little confused at first beacuse the killing curse kills immediately and wouldnt have given Lucius time for any goodbyes, but then it wouldn\'t have had the effect that it had if you kept it that way so I see why you changed it. That ending before he died was so heart wrenchingly beautiful. I like how you how you came back to the Beauty and the Beast essense there at the end with him becoming his beautiful self again because of love. That was just excellent. I am so sad that this is the end of this story, its one of the only ones that I have started from the beginning and made it to the end without the author abandoning it or some other reason, so I will always love this story and the fact that you stuck with it and always had exciting new chapters for us to read. It was a well done story in every aspect and I have truly enjoyed reading it. I will defintely be on the look out for new stories from you in the future, in fact if you would keep my email handy I would be overjoyed to receive notices from you on any of your new works. Take care, hope to see more in the future and thanks for the wonderful read. Shannon
person Victoria
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMg i just loved your story! Are you going to make a sequel? I really think you should.
person Wendy
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I truely love this story its the best LMHG out there. I wish you would do an epilogue though. I feel that is needed. Maybe have Lucius and Hermione get married in it, have their child celebrate its first birthday or something. The ending was good but it was just to open for me.
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19 I just read.
Beautiful simply beautiful.
A crediot to your ability to tell the tale.

Damn this was quite a dramatic rollercoaster ride. I wanna HUG!
*Glomps the author as everyone hightales it away from Darksoul*
person JTBJAB
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, brilliant!

I cried when he died... then when Merlin came... hehehe... brought me right out of it!

Well done on this!

I hope at some point we get to see Hope growing up!
person dragon34
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Although I am sad to see the story end, I\'m glad that it ended on a good note.
I can\'t wait to read about Severus and Ginny.
Please keep me on your e-mail list, I would love to be kept up to date about your new
stories, and their updates.


Jeannette
person kurtcouper
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is bloody amazing!! I hope you write more fics in the future. Your style is great. This story is great. I love it!!
person Alexia
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD I CANNOT BELIEVE ITS OVER .....(SNIFF SNIFF SNIFF) ......WOW THIS STORY WAS AMAZING FROM START TO FINISH I LOVED IT MORE THAN I CAN SAY AND YOU WHAT A BRILLIANT WRITER YOU ARE I WAS DRAWN IN WITH THE CHARACTERS I CRIED WHEN THEY CRIED LAUGHED AT THEIR JOKES WAS ANGRY WHEN THEY DID. I JUS CANT BELIEVE ITS OVER I LOVED IT THIS FINAL CHAPTER WAS EVERYTHING I COULD HAVE HOPED FOR AND MORE OH GOD I HAD TO TAKE A MOMENT AND PAUSE READING TO CRY WHEN LUCIUS DIED I EVEN E-MAILED MY FRIEND WHO HAS NEVER READ THIS STORY AND SHE FELT BAD. I CANT WAIT FOR THE FOLLOW UP WITH SEVERUS AND GINNY I CANT WAIT THIS HAS BEEN AN AMAZING READ AND I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK . LOVE YOU SOO MUCH HUGS AND KISSES

ALEXIA
person kbluesmom
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That ending was perfect! I nearly went spare when Lucius fell. I was about to cry when poof..Merlin showed up! You are truly one of the best writers I have ever read. Thank you for allowing me into your world. Writing like you have exhibited here comes not only form knowledge of the characters, but from the wordsmith that puts their very soul on onto a piece of paper or screen. Long may you guide us into the worlds you create. (Giving you a standing ovation)