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for The Beauty Found Within the Beast

by ShilohDarke

person alexia
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD I LOVE IT SO MUCH WOW WHAT A CLIFFHANGER I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED HOW WILL LUCIUS REACT WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO HERMIONE? WHAT ARE THE RESULTS OF THIS I WAS SWOONING AND ALMOST TO TEARS AT ONE POINT AND NOW IM ALL HIPED WITH ADRENALINE ITS LIKE IM MOVING WITH THE CHARACTERS I NEED AN UPDATE ASAP THAT WAS WONDERFUL I FEEL LIKE A JUNKY JONESEN FOR A FIX. LOTS OF LOVE HUGS KISSES AND THANKS YOURS TRULLY AND FAITHFULLY ALEXIA
person Sorceress Black
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WHAT!!! OMFG your are soooooo evil LOL. Was that chapter shorter? no matter it was a fast update and a damn good chapter. I really love the whole idea about Draco and Narcissa being stuck in this shitty limbo, poor Hermione puts a bit more on her shoulders eh, but that makes for a good story, and I really like having them both part of the it. And I can I just say DAMN those death eaters they are screwing with him again he\'s gonna go mad when he finds out that wormtail took her, I am assuming that was him and lol he kinda sounded like Golum from Lord of the rings with the \"precious\" and the \"we\" I dunno maybe I am just nuts and very tired. That was a very good chapter though, lots of emotion and some action, just what I like. Even though that was an EVIL cliffhanger lol I suppose thats what makes it good and keeps us anxious for more, you little devil haha. Anyhow I am still lovin this fic terribly I have been here from the start and I am defintely NOT going anywhere, keep up the wonderful writing! S
person Lyndie578
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a place to leave us? Who\'s got her? And more importantly, why? And most importantly, what is Lucius going to do about it?
person kurtcouper
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh!! How damn beautiful is this story?! It\'s fucking gorgeous. Poor Lucius. I feel bad for him. So bad. To know he cared so much for his family and then have them died... If that happened to me, I would undoubtedly try to cease my own life. He is so strong. I don\'t know how he could have survived. The words you write flow with such smoothness that I envy the paper. I\'m serious. You write beautifully. I can\'t wait to see more greatness and more updates from you. <3KC
person firewall
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, nice cliffie. I enjoyed the meeting of Narcissa and Draco. Lucius, as you portray him, would find it impossible to forgive himself for not protecting his loved ones. It will be interesting to see what happens if the Death Eater has taken Hermione to Voldemort. Or it could be Hermione\'s well-meaning friends who have kidnapped her...hmmmm? You will just have to update soon so we can find out. hahahaha! Nicely written.
person Angela
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more! omg i love this story
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more!! omg i love this story
person Michelle
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story keeps on getting better and better. I love this story so much.
Are Draco and Narcissa going to be on this story? as ghosts?
Is Lucius going to get his damaged side fixed?
You Know, I think it will be nice if he stayed the way he is because that\'s what true love is about, accepting the way they are. Hermione finds him BEAUTIFUL, even with his damaged side, that\'s all they need each other. Looks aren\'t everything in my opinion. This story makes you think about LOVE. LOL

I love your story and I hope you UPDATE WHEN YOU HAVE TIME.
#1 fan.
person chriancar
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the focus on emotion rather than external stimuli only.
person firewall
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a griping story you are weaving. Lovely. Thank you for sharing it with us.