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for The Beauty Found Within the Beast

by ShilohDarke

person kbluesmom
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was some b-day present.. the best I\'ve ever read! Hot, sexy, sweet and...hang on let me turn the A/C up a bit..did I mention HOT?! Any way.. great chappie. I love the way you released Draco and Narcissa from this plane of exisistence. I can hardly wait to see Severus pitch his hissy over their relationship. That should be an interesting conversation to say the least! And then The Boys..that should be an explosive little read. Thank you for your consistently good work and well thought out plot.
person Camerilla
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"And try to not hate Hermione
person firewall
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you have made up for the evil cliffie of the previous chapter and quite brilliantly I may add. I\'m glad to read that you are not finihed with this story. I\'ll look forward to reading more. Thanks again for sharing your story with us.
person GeekGoddess
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Welcome Jeanelle to the Lucius/Hermione cult and I am very glad that you have joined our yahoo group. Your story is beautiful and makes me disappointed that there is not another chapter after the last update. I look forward to reading lots more Hermione/Lucius stories from you in the future.


Patsy
person alexia
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT SOOOO VERY MUCH THE LOVE MAKING SCENE WAS BEAUTIFUL DONE TO PERFECTION IF I MIGHT SAY SO MYSELF THERE WERE EMOTIONS PLAYING AROUND IN THERE THAT WERE BEYOND WORDS THEN HIS MEETING WITH HIS FAMILY WOW I DIDNT KNOW WHAT TO DO MY STOMACH WAS DOING FLIPFLOPS I DIDNT KNOW WHAT EMOTION TO EXPRESS SO MANY THINGS OCCURED IN THIS CHAPTER IT WAS A WORLWIND OF EMOTIONS I SWEAR IT WAS AMAZING I CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT THANK YOU FOR THE QUICK UPDATE LOVE I HOPE YOU HAD A GREAT B-DAY. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP LOTS OF LOVE HUGS AND KISSES ALEXIA
person Labdhi
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Happy belated b-day!!! Jumping up and down...whohoo..great job!!! I can\'t wait to read more. Dreamy smile..lol.. :-)

Dianne
person PhantomsAngel
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m to lazy to log in, but wow another wonderful chapter. What a twist with Naricssa telling Lucius Hermione is pregnant. I love it. I am glad that this isn\'t the end because I am seriously addicted to this story. I\'ve been telling everyone I know who reads Hermione/Lucius to come over and check it out...yummy lemon!
person Sorceress Black
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes yes you have made up for the evilness with the two wonderful doses of Lucius smut! It chapter was just beautiful, I loved that he finally got his closure with his dearly departed family, that was a very touching scene. And with Narcissa\'s little predictions, that was just great. So it look like Hermione\'s daughter will follow in her moms footsteps going for an older guy, which is what Harry will be by then weeeee I love that. Oh I cannot wait to see everyones reactions this shoudl be really good. GREAT CHAPTER!!! keep up the fantastic work!
person Sorceress Black
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All right damn it! I had already reviewed for the most recent chapter and the computer decided to flip me the virtual bird, so I decided to come back and re-do it. So here I am a couple days or so later and can\'t remember a damn thing lol. No serisouly though you are officially EVIL!!!!!! Horrible cliffie lol. however I am excited that our pair are finally letting each other know how they feel, in more ways than one. So at least we can expect some goodies in the next chappy, unless heaven forbid some mindless jackass interupts them before they can erm...seal the deal? lol. Oh and that show of Lucius\' power and and desperation to get to Hermione was just fabulous!!!! I just want to say that I have been here from the beginning and I am defintely not going anywhere, this fic has come along so nicely and has been a joy to read so far. I wonder, do you already have it planned (already written) how much longer this is going to be, or are go just going along under your muses guidance? Just thought I would ask, as I don\'t want it to be over hehe. ok I am starting to do my whole late night rambling thing so I will just be quiet now and ask as usual that you please please pretty please with Lucius\' pimp cane on top, update again soon.:) I mean if you were to update say, immediately, then I would be willing to forgive that most evil of a cliff hanger. *crosses fingers* :P
person Sorceress Black
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, like I said my original review a few says ago a got screwed up, and I just re-did it finally, however I left out an important part of it, and even though it will now be belated I though I would add it all the same.

\"HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU
HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR JEANELLE
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOUUUUUUUUU!!!!!!!\"

Hope it was great!!

Shannon