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for The Beauty Found Within the Beast

by ShilohDarke

person firewall
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Perfect! You nailed the responses perfectly. Poor Ron but at least he was aware and receptive to her new love. I laughed at Snapes especially since he is the other major relationship fanfic for Hermione. Anyway. Another great chapter. I like your speed in updating, I don\'t have to re-read to remember the story.
person Sorceress Black
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*does happy dance* yayyyyy for another update!!! I have had one shitty day and I was so glad to see that you updated it has managed to make me feel a bit better. Ohhh this is gonna be good with Harry and Ron there now hehe. I can\'t wait to see what transpires. I wonder if Lucius will explain about what Narcissa told him to Hermione now since he made that little comment to Harry. What was the sickness all about, can she be pregnant already how much time has gone by hmmm I Can\'t wait to see what happens please update again soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person angel
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon i just love this story and i cant wait in till the next chapter comes out and read how everypne act to the new of mioneand lucius and about kingsley... well in till then (hope is soon ) later for now

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person Ash
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chap. I did get worried it was the last one for a minute there...and no, Ash is simply my real name.
person Bob Saget
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, they are gonna have a daughter....? That makes me giggle. ::giggle:: Can\'t wait until Severus has his little hissy fit over thier relationship!
person carrie
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i gotta tell you i love this story
person Giancarla
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* *sniffle* Although I know that that was a lemony-good chapter, the scene with Lucius and his first family was just so touching! *sniffle* Write more...
person JTBJAB
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am so glad that Lucius has found some peace, and \'hope\' *grin* I do think Hermione needs to tell Dumbledore that Kingsley was a traitor! Because I think that it would prove to move Dumbledore into questioning other people in the Order who have been acting suspiciously....if of course there are any.

Sorry, I think I spoke about Kingsley in the last chapter - god when did I start nagging?

Well done with this chapter, and I do look forward to the next one.....and I know you don\'t make us wait long for the next chapter, it\'s just time seems to move slowly when waiting for the next chapter, so it feels that more time has gone by then what really has!
person kurtcouper
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It deff. quelled the craving. Oh it was so beautiful! I actually felt tears spring into my eyes. The meeting with his son and daughter, how he even said he failed them, ugh gorgeous! I can\'t wait to see what else you come up with. Will Severus be upset from Lucius taking Hermione or just the relationship, period? I do hope Harry and Ron carry on a fuss, that\'s always fun. And Voldey, well... I can only imagine. I\'ll be waiting unitl your next update. <3KC
person Michelle
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhh..........this was a sweet chapter. I loved it. Hermione is having a baby, yupppppppppppyyyyyyyy. Good for Lucius, he let his family have the rest they deserved. Can\'t wait for chapter 12.