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for The Beauty Found Within the Beast

by ShilohDarke

person firewall
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know you gave us a little hint earlier in the story but you flummoxed me with that ending...pregnant?! already?! Whoa! Poor Harry, I can feel for him. Been there, done that. Thanks for sharing another great chapter. So tell me, (smiles engagingly) are you posting again quickly? After all, as you said it was a short chapter.
person Moepi
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. I want more Severus\' tantrum in the next chapter. It is always nice to see Snape in full steam.

Please go on and update soon. I think in your story Lucius will do his name justice in the end and I am really looking forward to it.

Cheers Moepi
AKA Mich
person kbluesmom
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again another resounding succcess! Great chapter. Looking forward to more!
person Lyndie578
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, HG&LM have them all confused and deep in thought now. Great shake-up! Hopefully he can continue to keep her safe! Thanks for the post!
person angel
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well that went better then they thought .. and nobody got hexed ~lol~i cant wait in till you next update sooo please update soon and in till next time keep up the great work and in till then later

angel
person Alexia
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT I CANT WAIT TO SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER I HAD THE PHYSICAL URGE TO PUNCH HARRY OUT AND WOW WITH THE VERY INSIGHTFUL RON I HOPE THERE ARE GOOD THINGS FOR HIM IN THE FUTURE I AM TRULLY SEEING A NEW SIDE TO LUCIUS AND I ADMIT IT FUSTRATES ME TO THINK THAT I WILL NEVER MEET THIS PERSON BUT YOU PORTRAY HIM SO BEAUTIFULLY THAT I AM MORE THAN HAPPY TO MAKE DUE WITH THIS ONE. THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR UPDATE I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT LOVE THE CONNECTION WITH HERMIONE AND LUCIUS I CANT WAIT TO SEE THAT MANIFESTED. LOTS OF LOVE HUGS AND KISSES TO YOU ALEXIA
person PhantomsAngel
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it!
person JTBJAB
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Personally I thought there should have been a bit more reaction to Hermione and Lucius being together - but - I understand that sometimes certain things need to happen so that something else can happen! Also, of course I don\'t know how they are going to be acting around the two whilst they stay in the Manor!

I look forward to finding out what you have instore for the characters!
person Wendy
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved this chapter as much as the one before. This story keeps truely getting better and better. Please keep up the great work!
person michelle
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love chapter 12. update soon. *grins*