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for The Beauty Found Within the Beast

by ShilohDarke

person fantasy_land
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
that story was so beautiful !! I honestly cried ! twice ! thank you so much for sharing your story with the world, i appericate it :)
person jkw625
schedule September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
As this story has been so very enjoyable I have blocked any grammatical, spelling or misapplied words out and would not write to you about them but... I am fairly sure word "emit" should have been used and not the word "omit" when Lucius is binding Voldemort's soul to exist only as a shade.
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok where can I buy that bodywash?? I use dove and while I love it... It's not THAT good... lol great story so far, but writing this is keeping me from it ;) thanks for another great LM fic
person GellyBelly
schedule July 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter nine broke my heart man...
It was so sad.
person Erin
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi--I read this story a long time ago, and I loved it. Lucius/Hermione is one of my favorite pairings, and I've enjoyed all of your work. Are you, by any chance, posting this story on fanfiction . net, under the name vertigo72? If this is NOT you, you should contact them immediately for plagiarizing this wonderful story!
person Anon
schedule November 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

person Anon
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter that's gotten me twice. I really feel for Harry. Especially when he says he's changed because of the war. Good writing.
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is actually the second time I have read the story. The opening scene is always so wrenching. I feel slightly nauseous when I read it. I'm sure that's not what you were going for, but if it gets that visceral response after the second reading, it's well written.
person COC89
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
My Dear, i must say this is the best harry fan fic i have ever read! I honestly wish everyday since beginning this story that you would write of a romance with such passion and depth as this, but be able to publish it. Make it up yourself. I would be a avid reader. But besides that i love your writing and imagination. I specially love how you added Merlin in the last bit. It was great, he reminded me of the headmasters bright side. Very weel done once again, and i hope you have many more stories to come.

CC

PS. I even cried at the end, what say you to that.