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April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hi,....pretty hot story...hope to read more soon...
keep up!
keep up!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have to be honest im not a haryy potter fan the only movie i like sort of is # 3 though i do like snape hes hot, in fact im still not sure why i decied to read this ficbut im glad i did cuase this was good and that means a lot coming from a hary hater like me
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm...this is even better than the other one. Delicious! (And lots of Snape action, which is always lovely!) I very much enjoyed your two stories with Severus, Remus, and Emmy, but I\'d love to see a longer fic from you that\'s more Snape-centered. Dom!Severus is so, so very sexy that he deserves a submissive of his very own, don\'t you think? (And I\'d be more than happy to volunteer of course!) Well, thanks for posting such yummy smut and please write more! Cheers. :)
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm... What do I think? Bad? NO! Good? YESSS! Sequel? Of course! It itches for one! :D
Dom!Sev I love! Can we resurrect Sirius for an encounter and have a foursome, please? ^_^ *deliciously dirty thoughts* mmm.... But anyway, hurry up with chapter two! ;)
Dom!Sev I love! Can we resurrect Sirius for an encounter and have a foursome, please? ^_^ *deliciously dirty thoughts* mmm.... But anyway, hurry up with chapter two! ;)
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June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Delicious! Yes please, more!! Very skillfully paced - and Dom!Snape is my favourite. Can\'t wait to see another chapter, or some more of something.
Your English is great - there were just a couple of times I\'d notice it\'s not your mother tongue, if you don\'t mind me saying so. \"rude fabric\" - we\'d say \"coarse\" rather than rude. Severus\' *hair* is greasy, not \"hairs\", and he\'d be *grabbing* rather than \"fisting roughly\". (All meant to be helpful, not criticise, so I hope you don\'t mind.)
Your English is great - there were just a couple of times I\'d notice it\'s not your mother tongue, if you don\'t mind me saying so. \"rude fabric\" - we\'d say \"coarse\" rather than rude. Severus\' *hair* is greasy, not \"hairs\", and he\'d be *grabbing* rather than \"fisting roughly\". (All meant to be helpful, not criticise, so I hope you don\'t mind.)