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for Hybrid Destiny

by fazed

person sbkar
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 Review: What? The grief over Narcissa went by the wayside awfully fast! And, the \"happy-happy, joy-joy\" feeling of Draco and Harry was just so cloying. Enemies are never _that_ forgiving, that fast! You\'ve got a nifty premise, but, I guess it\'s the time that gets me; it\'s just too damn quick! Even in fan fiction time!
person Lar
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I just wanted to say that I really like the way your story is going. I\'ve been checking for updates about three times a day.
person amethyst
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
intresting. I amthing lusiuc and darco are acting a bit ok and too nice. thought draco might be less want to be friend with harry and more wanting him for his look/body then falling for him. please write more chapters.
person Missi
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggles girlishly, which makes sense really* I can\'t wait for more. How do elves pick a mate? How\'s the fae gonna tie in? SO EXCITED FOR NO APPARENT REASON!!
person Missi
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! More updates on this fabulous story please!!
person typied
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Try not to state things so matter-of-factly; otherwise this is okay. :)
person elecktra
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! I loved it!! I soo can
person LPhoenix
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOHh.. a new story for me to enjoy... please update it again soon... i love harry\'s reactions to things!!!!!! very nicely done!
person thrnbrooke
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Way cool! I can\'t wait for chapter 5! More please!
person Lady X
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hhmmmmm...this is really good but just a tad rushed...and the chapters are too short. Could you possible fix the length? other than that i am really liking thgis so far.
Lady X