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What did Harry do? Who or what grabbed Bella? Can\'t wait for chapter 8!

Nice! Original powers... cool.

You\'re going to have a problem with Severus: ! - All Death Eaters thought that he was working with them and was a loyal Death Eater. 2 - Malfoy switched sides, and thus all useful information that he had would be known to Albus. 3 - That would include info about Severus being supposedly loyal to Voldy. 4 - While it isn\'t true, and Albus knows it isn\'t, Voldy presumably doesn\'t. So in Voldy\'s eyes Severus was just exposed. 5 - In Voldy\'s view Sev must either run or surrender or die. Even his mere presense in the school is unexcusable - Voldy knows now that the Malfoys are staying at the school - otherwise why would they be shopping with Minerva and Potter, so why hasn\'t Sev already reported it and tried to kill them and run away after doing so? (In Voldy\'s point of view?)

Wow . . . that was really (really truely) good.
I hope that you write more soon ;)

good chapter, cool thing with the portals

I hope Harry did send Bella to Hell.

*cheers* Yes! I agree with Harry about spending Bellatrix to hell! I only wish someone had taken photos. Because I think Neville would like to see that! Since Bellatrix is one of the reasons why Neville grew up without parents! Will Harry send Voldie to hell too? He SO deserves to be sent there! Pls throw Tonks and Andromeda in this! I want to see their reactions to Narcissa\'s death and Draco switching sides! Since Narcissa was Andromeda\'s sister! Pls throw Sirius in this! I want to see him meeting Narcissa in the after-life! What\'s in Harry\'s new album? If there is any pictures of Wormtail, BURN them!!

I have just read your chapter seven and am really liking how it\'s turning out. I love inheritance fics. I have read some of the reviews and had to shake my head at some of them. As a fic writer for this (and others) sites, it always amazes me on some of the flames people write. Hello!!!! It\'s our own fiction. The characters most times will not be in like the books. If the person is still flaming by chapter seven, there must have been something in it to keep them reading. Anyways......I like your story and can\'t wait to read more. Please update more and soon.
~tas

This is actually her husband, Josh, but since she\'s been reviewing, I thought I\'d type for her. If you could see the look on her face...she just keeps saying \"portal...portal...how the hell\'d he call up a portal...\" and shaking her head. It\'s hilarious, she just looks so confused. So, I think that this means she likes it. I do, too-we read together-and I think you should update. My wife never shuts up, and you have her \"gobsmacked\" as they say. You deserve the Nobel Peace Prize, or a Pulitzer. Take your pick.

KISSING!! THERE WAS KISSING!! I LOVELOVELOVELOVE IT!! (sorry, got a little excited)

hi,good chapters,bye