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for Hybrid Destiny

by fazed

person Missi
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The wolves were so cool!! I love this chapter (I say that about all of your chapters, but it\'s true). I can\'t wati for the next one!
person Sheree
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why does it have to be a 3some? Why can\'t Lucius get with someone his own age like Lupin or Snape? And why does Harry have to bottom for both? Draco could be his bottom.
person elecktra
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...that was a too cute chapter! Funny also! Update soon.
person thrnbrooke
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I can\'t wait for chapter 13! My second favorite pairing is actually Draco/Harry/Lucius. Though my favorite pairing is of course Draco/Harry. Maybe being royal elf Harry can have two mates. Who knows? Except you that is.
person Squallsama
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I like this one! I hope Draco is dominant in the relationship also, since Lucious is gonna be with them too. Hmmm... Yummy, that\'s a very yummy pairing. *grins* Interesting, I like how you made, decifering who Harry\'s mates were by the touch of his tattoo--very cool. ^_~ I\'m sure there\'s more to it than that, but I figured it was one of the ways to tell? I remember you writing something about Harry not knowing how he would know. I can\'t wait for the Lucious/Harry/Draco action! *dances*
person moi
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this story. lovelovelovelovelove. i love the pairing of harry/lucius and harry/draco. that fact that you story has both makes it even better. lucius is in a bit of self denial, i must say. anyway, great story. update soon!
~moi
person Missi
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, can\'t wait for the next!
person sbkar
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So...who\'s top? Will the M/M/M be the sum of the relationship, or will it always be about Draco and Harry, with Lucius as an incidental addition?
I\'d almost rather you introduced someone for Lucius, just because the incestous overtones are so overdone.

Yes, Lucius is lonely; but, he _is_ Draco\'s father, and this being Draco, can you really see him sharing nicely with anyone????
person sbkar
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"cute little elf\" Oy!!! <>

Chapter 12 review: This chapter seems more...rushed than the others. The flow wasn\'t as smooth as well. I do like the description of Harry\'s calming power; very nifty.
person Alexa
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Getting better and better... :-) Fun.

When you say that Harry is going to be the only bottom - is that only bacause of wanting to avoid isest? Because they could have a threesom with Draco bottoming for Harry while Harry was bottoming for Draco. Also, if they are in bed together, there is little point in avoiding actual intercorse between Draco and Lucius - it\'s just too fine a line between \"insest\" and not. Or should I say non-existant line? I personally don\'t mind insest - it is fiction, after all. And the people that do mind - I don\'t think just avoiding father-son penetration will soothe them.

Another thought... About the wings - I know it\'s magic and all, but what if they get dirty? Birds clean their wings constantly, it is important if they want them to function properly. How about him cleaning them once in a while? That\'s just good maitanace. He could use a spell. And it would add realism. :-)