rate_review Reviews

I\'m liking the story, but I don\'t like the foreshadowing that hints at a triple bond between Harry, Draco and Lucius. I hope there\'s another explanation for Lucius being able to feel the feathers.

Love your story...can\'t wait to read more....update soon

is lucius mad about possibly being harry\'s mate? it kinda seems that way, but maybe he\'s just worried about what it will do to his relationship with draco. anyway, i really liked this chapter because draco was bring protective and we finally got some answers. can\'t wait for the next chapter!
~moi

Harry gets two mates? Yippie! It does get to be the 3 of them! I can\'t wait for chapter 14! But why does he have 2 mates?

Amy, I think I love you. You are a wonderful writer and i beg of you to keep up the wonderful work that is this fic. i cannonot wait until the next installment... Lucius isn\'t Harry\'s mate too though is he? Cause thats you know just kinda creepy. MORE DRACO/HARRY SLASHYNESS!!! Long live draco and harry forever.
Lady X

I was a little skeptical at first about the whole elf-fae-wizard hybrid thing, but you seemed to have pulled it off nicely. I can\'t wait until you post more.

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THATS DISGUSTING!!! I THINK I MIGHT BE SICK! Please say he\'s able to choose ONLY ONE as his mate? PLEASE!!!
i dont think id be able to take it if he had to mate with BOTH of them... eeeewwww at the same time.... ewwww....

wicked!
draco is harrys mate! u so hve 2 continue dis

*Sigh* If you must, then a Harry sandwich will just have to do (Yipee!!!). Your story takes anew angle for me in the fandom and you are pulling it off well. You tend to stick to dialogue which is good, but some description rounds it out and paints a more detailed and interesting picture of what is happening: Especially inner feelings and thoughts. That would make your story flow a little better. Then action is moving quickly and so is your plot. You\'ve made Harry practically invinsible with all the new powers he can have - but for your story it works. I\'m surprised that Lucius and Draco seem to be taking Narcissa\'s death so easy. You are cautiously developing the love triangle which means you have put a lot of thought into making your story realistic: Cudo\'s to you! I would love to read more!!!!

fun
poor harry everything happens to him!
sounds fun tho poor draco had to sleep with harry i\'m gessing it\'s harry/draco/lucious? fun