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for Hybrid Destiny

by fazed

person tessa3
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmm... i think it should be just Drac and Har... i am assuming that Lucius has the dark mark,ne?? and sense fae i believe can smell imperfections on a person.. i believe that would be an imperfection *nodding* and harry just don\'t know why he is reacacting the way he is *nodding* i ithink that\'s about it... *thinking, taps brain* i think that Lucius is real calm about everything... he doesn\'t show interest in Harry and was only fascinated by his wings... Lucius can become a person Harry can talk to when Remus avoids being around *shrugs* don\'t know.. it depends... but that\'s how it can work ya know??? and If Drac would leave the issue alone about Harry, mates and his father i believe that Lucius could care less bout harry in that sense.. ya know what i mean??/
person sbkar
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 17 review: Ha! I like the resolution involving the dark mark magic making Lucius not smell right!!!
Very good, and fitting with the Malfoy urge to not share, except under duress. Very good twist...The sex, well...a wee bit jumpy...but, nice...
person JadeKipping
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So I really really don\'t want harry to be mated to both Lucius and Draco, i think the elf and the fae should have to agree, after all generally when speaking or referring to mates we are speaking singularly - not to mention i\'m sooo not a fan of harry/lucius
person jewel of the sea
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really love this fic,i don\'t think it should be harry/draco/lucious as i don\'t think either malfoy is the shareing type even with each other.
person cottoncandy
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Though, I can\'t wait to see Hermione and the Weasley\'s reactions to Draco and Harry\'s relationship! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Sheree
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
agree on one mate - no sharing. It\'s bad enough that you are going to make Harry a bottom when everything you read shows the fae as being tough, aggressive and definitely the more dominate but to have him and Lucius together is just nasty. I certainly wouldn\'t mate with someone who has tried to kill me.
person Aisling
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i luv this.. please update soon for me! :D Thanx u huni cya xx
person moi
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! smutty goodness! this story of yours has become my new obsession... i\'m glad you update every day! i check the updates probably about 5 times a day, just for your story! kudos
~moi
person cottoncandy
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think the elf half and the fae half of Harry should agree on a mate. I really hope it\'s Draco! But if you deside that Lucius should be involved, I hope Draco is the one Harry cares about more emotionally. Though, I wouldn\'t mind Lucius and Draco sharing Harry (that would be freakin\' hot!) but I just hope you don\'t disregard Draco! I love DM/HP pairings the most!

Love the story! Update soon
person Alexa
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it would be more interesting with two mates, each for a different part of Harry. So the relationships could be different too. It would add interest to the story - it would be much richer, complex, and interesting than if it was a typical one-on-one mate thing.