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I like this story, but I don\'t think that you should make it a three-way relationship. I think it should just be Lucius and Draco. But anyways, you\'re doing a great job.

LMAO I\'m sorry, I\'m very sick today and am not thinking properly. I MEANT to say Draco/Harry pairing because Draco seems to really care about Harry.

In response to your author\'s note, I really *don\'t* like threesomes, and especially not when they\'re cross-generatational. If you left it at Draco and Harry, that would be great.

Please don\'t make it H/D/L

please please please

whoa this is great and i can\'t wait for more update as soon as you can

oooh great update.... bad Remus! poor Harry, he\'s only just started eating again LOOOL

So nice that you could make it clear and not until the twelveth chapter that lucius would also be a chosen mate which makes so little sense. I could have really appreciated it if you could have mentioned that when you first mentioned your story in the index. Now I have found I like the story and I have to give it up. When you come into a birth inheritence you most generally end up with one life mate and if you decide as the author that you would like to variate that for your own indulgence, sense this is your story the least you could have done is mention it right up front so that I too could have indulged myself in the choice of what kind of story I would like to read. Because you dont mention it in the index I find that I am often turning from stories that have a simular description because I dont want to read about this threesome and here I have made this mistake again. I will have to write the title on a separate piece of paper and the authors name to make sure that I dont read another story of yours again and get fooled.

great chapter. Glad Remus is better. One thing though...I think wolf babies are known as pups not cubs. other than that i loved it. cant wait for more.
lady X

Chapter 15 and 16 review: Your dialogue is getting a bit stilted; the younger generation would have more contractions.

As to the fae versus elf mating drive: Malfoys don\'t seem to be the sharing type; ergo, the drives would more than likely settle on one, f
or peace and breedings sake. Besides, Remus seems more in need of Lucius...

*does air guitar* rock on!! *nodding* THAT WAS SO COOL!!! not the draco cheing remus out but the fact that...you are uber cool.. *coughs* um yeah.. love the fic..keep up the good work