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Thank you, thank you, thank you.

You updated, you sweetheart you!

Harry is pretty powerful. Draco and Herm. are on their way to being friends. Lupin, Snape, and Malfoy? (Do we get to see any action?). And lots of happy fluff!!! Now your only problem is Ron, but every story has to have a bad guy. Just so long as Ron doesn\'t betray Harry to Voldy out of spite. What creature is Harry going to charm in magical creatures? I like happy endings. Will Harry have any more unexpected surprises in his future because of his heritage? How about hooking Herm. up with Blaise?

Oh I can\'t wait for chapter 22! Harry didn\'t have a form? With that much power? Ron is an arse? Hahaaaaahah!

haha! Ron got it good! neways thanks for updating! cant wait for the next i think the Creatures class is going to be interesting....

this chapter was great and i love this story and i can\'t wait for chapter 22 what happens in Care of Magical Creatures
well look forward to more

Those were great chapters you did!! I loved the prank you did on Ron!!! I\'m also glad Mione and Blaise are still there friends!!! I\'m soooo loving this story! Please update soon.

Muwhahaha I love the owls attacking Ron :P I hope you have plenty of Ron torture in the future hehe 8P

Thanks for the update! I can\'t wait for the next one!

I was just reading some of the other posts (which I do from time to time for no apparant reason, really) and I just wanted to tell you not to listen to morons. Like the one right before my first post today. They didn\'t have to type the marshmallow roasting shit (and then try n say it\'s not) telling you what you have to do to be a writer. Would we loyals read it (and eagerly await the yummy updates) if it sucked? NO. Screw em all-don\'t change. We like it, and you need to be true to you, in your writing and all you do. The way you\'re writing is you, don\'t let morons change you. Just wanted to get that off my chest, and let you know that there are people who like your story. INCLUDING THE WINGS. (Like I said, I was reading the posts....)

Personally, I like the idea, but you have merged a little too many cliches into it to make it a good one. The flow of the story is too quick and no emotions can be felt from it. I also find your writing style a little boring at times. The characters are too ooc at times, as it seems you just write them like you think fits but isn\'t the character at all. This is not a flame, for if it were, I\'d would have damned the story straight and not given my critisizim. Just because people give critique doens\'t mean it\'s a flame and you need to put yourself down. Think about the things I\'ve told you and try to make yourself better.

amazing plot i say.. but i greatly disapprove of your grammer and writing technique.. they seem a bit.. immature. keep working at it and i\'m sure you\'ll write better. a story is more intresting to read if it is written perfectly and flawlessly. good story plans!