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for Hybrid Destiny

by fazed

person Shinigami24
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins* This I got to see! Pls have Harry go through mood swings, food cravings, morning sickness, etc! I wanna see Draco\'s reaction to peggy Harry! It would be loads of fun if Harry went through his mood swings and accused Sevvie of calling him fat! *evil laughter*
person The Shadow Bandit
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update. I love mpreg. I think that due to their ages that one child will be enough of a responsibility. They still have so much to deal with that one will be enough to handle along with everything else. My vote is for a boy. I love the idea of a boy, the offical heir, being born first.

Thank you again for sharing your story with me.
person ayanna
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think they should have twin boys! great story by the way!
person Sahira
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Liked it once again:) More please!
person Deans Darling
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m loving this story. You are doing a good job on it. A little bit of a suggestion though. Things are happening a little too fast. Example: Harry and Draco\'s escape from Moldy Voldy was too perfect. The more trauma or difficulty you give your characters the better. It seems rushed. Other than that it is great. Now for your question. Twins would be great. At first I thought girl/girl. Can\'t you just see the too proud dads? It\'s too cute. Then I thought boy/girl. But I couldn\'t get behind that very much. So now I\'m back to girl/girl with very elvish names. I suggest a very short gestation period too. Like maybe Harry would wake up noticably pregnant the following morning, with debilitating morning sickness. Something to do with mixing fae and elvish blood. Have the time between Harry\'s two cycles be the birth. So 3 months. I think that sounds reasonable.
Once again, I love this story
DD
person Ameshia
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story i look to see if u updated everyday. I think that Harry should have twins a boy and a girl the boy looking like Draco and the girl looking that Harry. I hope u like my idea. Again i love this story it rocks!!!!

Sincerly

Ameshia
person sarah
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think he should have two boy twins that would be so cute and one could be named nicholas(sp:S)or luke lol
person Lady X
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Herm\'s reaction. It was just SO like her. I could totally see her doing that in one of the books if JKR miraculously decided to get Harry and Draco together and have one of the preggers. I personally think the baby should be a little girl. You see boys too much and twins one of each too much so I think it would be nice for you to do something different. oh and if you wanted to go by Genetics her hair should be Brown. Becuase hair color genes blend together instead of there being a dominate color more often that not. Or if you want it too REALLY look like theres it should have Black hair and Silver eyes....oh and her name could possible be Davina, thats of Hebrew Origin, or Maybe, Amata, thats of Latin origin, They both mean Beloved or Loved one. I like diffent names like that and I\'ve always thought that they should have a child whos name meant Loved or Beloved. You see I\'ve put alot of thought in this. This isn\'t even me thinking about it as I sit here this is mostly pre-thought stuff except for the names. Wel i think I should strop wasting your time with this...wow this has to be the longest coment I\'ve ever made. Please e-mail me if you liked ANY of it at all. I would really appreciate it. thanks for the time you spent reading this. I really love you fic and can\'t wait for more.
XOXO
Lady X
person kat
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think he should have twins..... hehehehe *grins evily* double trouble and all that. the story so far is awesome (yes i know lame adjactive). can\'t wait for the next chapter. ^_^
person anjellic
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter indeed!!!! I wonder if harry will get pregnant???!!! They are a beautiful couple...you did great with this story so far! Update soon! :O)