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schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great second chapter! Update again and soon! This is getting interesting! I love it!

Tiffany
person Cristie
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well this story is getting straight to the point isn\'t it. Interesting so far though. Snape always seems to have such a protective nature to him doesn\'t he. I\'ll be watching for your next update.
person jennyjo
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is starting out very interesting. Looking forward to the updates
person Julie
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DUDE! This is great! You rule *praise* ;)
person pinkyheather
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is the best start to a story i\'ve read for a while. I can\'t wait to read more of it. Wonderful job!
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far! Can he save her? Who poisned her? I can\'t wait to see how this story develops!

Tiffany
person Pixi
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm keep going, I\'m interested
person Moi
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I like it very much, please continue.
person TaintedAngel
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Beauty.
First off I love the name of the story! Hermione the damsel in distress and Sevvy her Knight in shining armour. I like that both of your stories that I am following are sort of hurt/comfort stories. I see Hermione differently and it reflects in my fics (yes I know I am slack on mine..my muse died :-) )
Love this story so far chicky babe!!
Look foward to more!!

TaintedAngel xxx
person mary
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! Hope he can come up with a cure and find out who gave the poison to her! Can\'t wait to read the next chapter!